Hi Author!! Amazing story so far, I really enjoy it. The MC has a unique power and, while at the start the writing quality was a little offputting, it got progressively better :) I was just wondering, is there any reference/character art for the MC and other important characters for your novel? Thanks!
In which chapter does the FF get good? the MC is pndj and his character development burns my brain xd
I'll be honest with you....I love this novel. It's so good, I nearly sacrificed my sleep on countless occasions to soak in this story.I totally recommend this. By the way if your interested in action, magic fantasy stories I also recommend trying Dimensional overhaul
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The thing is, most of the factors in this story can be considered fine with good potential except.. the logic of the characters rendering the story to be non sense. example? the Mc is literally still hanging out with the killer of his sister and father. some events makes no sense logically that it makes it so irritating. this was suppose to be a system but i rarely saw the system stat with the springs he currently has. so sick of it so i dropped it..