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Very interesting and unique concept, the author went with the system genre but added a unique twist to it, which is very exciting! _______
its a great novel, at start mc is naive but later u can see improving, weak to strong character not like every other op mc i like the way story is going and world backgroung introduction is also good. if you are new reader, i recommend this to novel you guys. its worth your time
Bro very good story, This is a story which everyone likes, I loved the story. Keep writing and keep Rocking ..................................................................
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Story is refreshing. Author is doing a good job with the world building by sharing visual marks when describing the locations. only thing that can be better - summertime as a reader I am losing track of person sitting and it is announced inversion. author could little bit elaborate on the effect of the spring MC inversed after using it.
Pretty good star. Just not for me. 10 year old character too are annoying for me ^^' (still better than adult acting like children, but still a no to my taste).
just found this novel now and it last updated 9months ago, I'm scared it'll be too good and I'll feel bad for not having any more chapters, it's like watching a good anime that doesn't have a 2nd season
Is this on hiatus author nim?🤔 I want to give it a go but I don’t want to wait for no chapters to not come out.
For story development, character design, world background, and updating stability I don't care and don't have enough information to make a judgement. However, for writing quality there is a simple theme I have noticed for all 50 chapters. This is dialogue between characters. The reason this is so critical is because this shows an author's lazyness in a way. As someone who is starting to write, for me personally, dialogue is extremely easy to write. Takes no time or effort required thinking for the story. This, however, isn't the main reason. The main reason is the beginning. Instead of the author thinking about some interesting way to put in the conflict between Rein and his related family, he just states it. It's very lazy and easy. I just feel that the author could definitely have spent more time reflecting on ways to introduce a purpose for Rein rather than have someone ramble on about it. IF you were to use the current method you use then you need to somehow explain beforehand about the person rambling on, and how it's a trait of his. But even that feels forced if done improperly. Why would you care about a bad start? Because I won't pay to read dialogue. I want a story that is thought out.
a good book. not my cup of tea and I only got through a few chapters but I still think it's worth trying maybe one day I'll get back round to this one
I didn’t have a wn acc when I started to read this, but now I do, so I’m proud to say I came from drip server and was the first 2k to read this great story
this book has good promise however the author clearly doesn't know how to implement a story without forcing it. The author also claims that the main characters a 10-year old kid yet he does things that no ten-year-old would ever know how to do especially if all they do is be left home and clean all day and babysit so the main character doesn't make sense and with his sister and overall the entire story feels very forced the fights boring and sure the author has like a direction he's going with the story but it doesn't matter if you can't get past the first 30 chapters without wanting to vomit because you can't understand what's going on in the story by there because of poor writing or because the story is so far so you can't get entertained with it.
Very very solid stuff. The story is near incoherent in the beginning I was about to drop it tbh. Thats why Im so genuinely impressed by how fast this novel improves. Give it like 15-20 chapters and the story turns from a 2 to 4.5. Easy recommendation. If youre familiar with my hero academia it kiiinda reminds me of that. As in, the abilities are creative (oddly specific at times) and give the characters space to outwit their opponents. The characters have to earn their wins instead out stat checking them.
I will start reading this novel, so I hope you give me the general idea of the novel and the character of the hero and his relationships.💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
I want to continue reading hoping that future chapters will get better but I think I'm losing a lot of brain cells... The problem with your story is that the MC is mature but at the same time naive and the side characters feels like don't have a brain. They are just like actors who were following the script robotically, they feels awkward, out of place, lifeless, or whatsoever. All in all, the plot seems lifeless and don't have good interactions with each other. I think I have to write more to clarify more things so just ask if there's any questions. That's all. Hope you all the best.☺️
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pretty mediocre. characters make nonsense choices and the story develops in an unsatisfying way. the mcs ability is cool. hes way to mature for a 10 year old though. The writing itself is decent, if the story was different I would read more.
So has this basically been dropped?? I’ve quite enjoyed it this far but it’s been so long since an update. I’m about to remove it from my library, I have at least 2 dozen others that I’m reading concurrently and several are about to get get dropped including this one. I’ll wait a little longer but … I have others in a waiting list to read if this one needs to be discarded.