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Well, while I am elated that a new "modern army vs fantasy world" is available here, I must say that I am not digging the continuous time skip directly to a new location with no further elaboration like the village being raided by bandits. Also, some revision is needed to remove a lot of typos. Overall, I give this story a 3.74/5 rating. May I suggest a POV to the otherworld people on how they are reacting to the "demons"? Also, try not to make the story look rushed make it more immersive on how the US deals woth the opportunity given to them, what with an untouched world with an abundance of resources ripe for the taking, the consequences of conscripting civilians to the other world's military that may lead from a ****** riot to a revolt after the US introduces to them the concept of ******* and equality. Can I ask if there are demihumans in this world like elves? Also, keep up the good works and improve yourself on past experiences.
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