Reviews of Into marvel as a celestial

Well here is just my honest review : Pros: + The idea is new nothing so far abused that much so it feels fresh Cons: - Bad execution of the idea - Kinda short chapters ( but that is not a big problem) - Some grammer mistakes

The story is so good, i'll be expecting for how it will develope. It's very rare see a story this good make and with coherency, the great majority doesnt even investigate about the race

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