Monkey Bread
Well the storyline is pretty fleshed out besides the world setting and backstory on certain scales like sect scaling, where the town is located in what world and such stuff like that but the city is fleshed out nicely enough now if something goes and gets randomly injected. Also by fleshed out standards the 9 provinces are extremely lacking and they’re even given the feeling of being within a jolly horse ride away from the town. Now hopefully it gets somewhat fleshed out throughout the story in the contextually, (now I go on a tangent directed towards the author) now I don’t mean add in extreme detail just avoid making the areas sound like their so close to each other, you should atleast put some distance marks on how far the guy goes to find his people (or anything like that where it is confusing context wise)he is just in the mortal realm after all. Now terribly sorry about the review being so long and I wrote this later then In my night then I should’ve but I at least edited it somewhat. can hardly wait for the other twenty chapters.