Monkey Bread
This weeks batch is terrible. Theres so much wrong with this, to the point where I can't be bothered to go out of my way and talk about everything wrong with this. I'm going to keep it brief. -God awful translations. I've read better MTLs. -Soulless nonsense. -Nothing makes sense or is explained. -Bad everything (world building, characters, cheat, writing quality etc, nothing about this was even adequate. it was all below average at best.) TLDR; train wreck not worth reading + a translation somehow inferior to MTLs.
first the translation is bad but to MTL readers it's good second this novel is unique as it's a combination of off different types of novels 1 sect building novels in cultivation world 2 clan/business novels in cultivation world i think this more of a try by the author of trying to combine two different types into one the problem with such 1st of it's kind novels is that the combination is not perfect as in such works a 20-30 chapters would focus on one side then the next on the other hence emulsion is not very great and sometimes breaks too
An interesting story that attempts to combine Sect-Building and Business Building. Things I liked: -Combines concepts that I like. -Some of the characters are entertaining. Things I didn't like: -Translation is atrocious. It made my head hurt at times -World building is almost none existent. A lot of things are simply not explained. -The focus is heavily biased towards the business side of the story, but maybe that would have been solved in future chapters.
Starts off extremely predatory, and then barely focuses on that aspect, but in the story it makes sense so not an issue yet considering pace of story and current number of chapters. Translation is trash and in the later chapters seems worse than MTL. Unless the original author was just very dumb. A lot of things are very unclear, the thought processes of some characters are inconsistent, but the story is progressing at a reasonable pace… kinda. Everyone is still in mortal stage, and foundation stage cultivators are considered a supreme fighting force. Not sure how well planned out the growth of the story is, but pretty solid start if you turn off your brain and just read the story. Also I think she is a crossdresser or thinks she’s a guy, but is a girl. You’ll know when you get there, because of translation it’s not easy to confirm
so far its nice the MC not getting anything from the system without money. so mc must work to gain money to exchange for system point. no free lunch or easy present for the MC (for now) except the cultivation strength of disciple don't know what will happen at more. chapter but, until this chapter the mc need to gain money to exchange with system point to buy things for the sect. kinda like top up system but more harsh to mc