GREAT STORY AND A GREAT WRITING STYLE SINCE THE MC'S ACTIONS LIVE UP TO THE TAG: EVIL MC I CAN ONLY SAY THAT YOU NEED A PROOFREADER SINCE SOME SENTENCES NEED A BIT OF IMPROVEMENT
Great I Like this This is a fan fiction and as a fan i like it very much Thanks Author Keep up the good work. Don't care about reviews and try to bring the story to a end. This is an accomplishment itself
Nice work!!! One thing more, Hmmm if you choose girls of this worlds? Highschool dxd Bleach Fairy Tail Fate Grand Order Danmachi Shinmai Maou no Testament Date A Live Overlord Strike the Blood Infinite Stratos Monogatari Series To Love Ru Konosuba Kobayashi-san chi no maid Goblin Slayer Touhou Azur lane You can choose many in each world
it's the best fanchin I've ever read. and a question to the author if a fancfin with anime powers but not in an anime world is not a problem no
your novel is very good bro i have reading your other novel too it is good too your writing is very good i hope you Won't drop this. thanks for the novel stay good bro
Nice. The first thing I did was to be a part of the world and the other is a great way to get the best out of the way and I have to say that I am not a fan of the most important things to do in the future and the other is a great way to get the best out of the way and the second half and a lot of people are going to get it right away from the city center of the room with fireplace with an open mind.
Reveal spoiler
I definitely enjoy this more than the OG One piece, and I need more updates on the story please, Review: at the start of the story it was slow pace but at the 12 chapters it kinda caught up and the you will feel the excitement and will not get bored [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great fanfic, please keep up the good work and don't listen to the critics there will always be people who want the author to write what they think should be the story, but in my opinion the author should follow what he thinks is best for development of history.
.i also author so i know your feeling when someone just give 1 star review without even read the novel..now let me help you....for each 1 star review ...you just add 5 star review using your acc..so it will stabilize your novel rating...i always use that type of way ....hope it will help you...keep writing this novel...i support you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]....by the way..you novel is good...it much better then my own novel...
This book is not for me, I guess. The grammar needs more work while the story's premise is quite good but it could also be said to be quite common already(multiverse travel and such). A piece of advice. I think you'll have a hard time keeping track of the abilities, status, skills, and all these stuffs as this fanfiction go on. There's a reason why only a few people write gaming novels. I wish you all the best and good luck in your future endeavors.
Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job Good job
great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great
Exatamente história mano não deixei cair kdbhdbdjdhhdjhhdhyeidhhdjhghggyhvbvxkkhyjigyuhgygsjgjwjgskbsgsjgshsshdhdknsghdjshgsjjshhsiijgauuyeouueiytyeiyi
Great book !! Please continue to please us with your creativity! There are people who only want to offend others. Therefore, ignore them, your book is excellent and deserves to be continued. And so that as many people can read it.
I really like the system you have and I will keep reading your story and I can't wait for the next chapter keep up with the excellent work and I will keep reading your story and don't let the idiot ruin this for the people who are really enjoying your story I don't want you to stop I really want to read more of this story
Its not perfect but it's better than alot of other fanfic I have seen and I hope to see more the writing shows improvement throughout the story and it progresses at a natural pace
Reveal spoiler
One of the best things I've read, the main character and his interactions with the regime and the lack of that arrogance and selfishness found in most other novels, attract me the most.
aaaaaaaaassssssaaaaaaasfhfgcggsdhchffhfggfthcdzgydhjdgifgjrsguffhggggjcdtjxfhgghhgugghghhzhzhhhhzhghhgzgghgugzhzhgzvzgthgzhgzjftufthgtzgggtthh