I would dare say this fanfic is gold except for the mc being way too childish and acting immature at every turn. His actions and op powers makes him an object of fear and headache for the more paranoid people inspite of being a relatable, funny and likable character. To be fair if mc met batman in the dc verse the latter would get a migraine large enough to put him into a coma indefinitely.
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I like the idea and all,but the grammar is kinda annoying ocd wise but if I look past it with its spelling mistakes (aka it needs capital letters and commas),other than that its nice to read.
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I've only read till chapter 6 so I might be wrong, but there is a Harem tag in this fanfic but the author said in the comments of the first chapter that there won't be a Harem in this fanfic.... A lie? I don't know... Besides that there are quite a few grammar mistakes. Many times I have read a sentence and couldn't understand it, I had to read it multiple times before I managed to understand what the author meant to write... Also, the plot for some reason progress exactly as the movie, instead of trying to change it and do it more conveniently, the MC doesn't then do anything!! Let the map to the City of Gold get burned and many other things he knows I'm going to happen and yet doesn't change them. For me seeing all those missed opportunities is too frustrating to continue reading
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looks like a translation from Chinese. My IQ getting lower and my brain cell is roasted
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Great fanfic, beginning a little difficult, but after chapter 40+ it gets much better. keep going it's really good! I think it's amazing how good it is to see a protagonist unconcerned about things, making the story without the anti-cliché, which I see in most fanfic, a bad thing is the little interaction between the MC and the girls! But nothing that spoils the story itself.
How should I say this.... everything is all over the place, Think the main issue is how the MC is portrayed. NURF fest to the point its like what's the point even getting power, it's like he took 1 step forward just to get nurfed 20
It is not a Fic for those who want something serious, consistent and meaningful. The Fic is from a first-time author just for the purpose of entertaining without overthinking things, and as the author said, it's a bit difficult to read with his English If you want to complain about everything when reading, don't read it
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Idk is a good novel, the grammar isn't good, but you can read. But man the mc, i mean he reincarnated 12 or 13 years ago, the relationship with Alice is rushed, of course, but is good they act like a couple, but he is so shy and don't have any confidence when talking with Annabeth, i mean they met and then he accepts her beats him even if they don't know each other, and i just want to ask why? The mc have a romantic relationship with Alice, so even if she "beats" him is nothing serious is more like a couple, but with Annabeth idk is like meh.
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MORE PLEASEEE update so slow ;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;;;-;-;-;;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;;- I CAN UNDERSTAND ITTT MY BRAIN CORRECTS THE GRAMMAR ANYWAY JUST UpDATEE
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eu gostei , gostei bastante do ritmo e da configuração dos personagens canônicos , ainda mais que essa historia realmente mostra que é para se divertir acima de tudo