Reviews of In the mind of an NPC

Interested in what the author has to offer to his readers in the forseeable future. Would bookmark it and pay attention to its updates and whatnot.

yes the novel very good i like it intresting character and world bulding high hopes i have for this blah blah blah trying to fill the 150 character length

So far, the story seems really interesting, with two other settings that have as much potential as the current one (I'm looking at you, Beast Planet). The writing quality could be improved, but there's no major problem. It's perfectly readable and fluid in a sense. I'd definitely recommend giving it a chance for any indecisive new reader. Try it!