24 Chapter 24 first time
(MC pov)
We walked inside Stephen house and we see Stephen and young Neil and Scott and they are listening to a song and talk with eachother other.
"Listen to this part right here"Stephen said with a smile
"I know Gordon Downie is a totally sweet genius"Scott said with a smile
"He's the genius"Scott said
"He's such genius"Stephen said while nodding
"Hi guys"Ramona and I said at he same time
"Who Is the genius?"Ramona asked
They finally noticed us.
"Wow how did you guys come here?"Stephen said with a shocked face
"It's Ramona power, it's like teleport"I said
"Wow that's so cool"young Neil said
"Gordon Downie, it's his solo album"Scott Answered Ramona
"Who's that?"I asked
"The guy from the tragically hip"young Neil said
I have no idea who's that guy.
"Well now only Kim and knives aren't here but they will be here soon so let's get ready to make vegan shaerperds pie"Stephen said
"Who's vegan?"Ramona asked
"None of them, they just like to be inclusive"I said
"Edward you know us so well even though we met a while a ago"Scott said with a smile
We hear the door opening and Kim come inside.
"Hey"kim said
"Hey" other and I said
"Hi, Kim right?"Ramona asked
"Hi and yes I'm Kim"Kim said with a indifferent face
(Kim pov)
I'm sure the first time I met Edward he had a normal face and a normal body but now looking at him I can feel my panties getting wet.
It's been a while since I had sex, when I got back home I will take long bath.
(MC pov)
We started cutting vegetables and everybody is helping.
"So this is like a collaborative meal type thing?"Ramona said
"Chopping vegetables keep us out of the trouble with the law"Scott said and I don't get what he means
"One cut the po"Stephen start explaining how to make the pie
Scott and Kim and Ramona and I continue to to cut vegetables and young Neil and Stephen prepared other things.
"So how did you guys end up dating I know you guys met after Julie party but I don't know how you guys end up dating?"Kim asked
"Well I needed to know something and Ramona knew that thing so I asked her to explained to me"I said
"I explained to him the thing he wanted to know and then we go to my house and we talked about other things"Ramona said
"Then we noticed we like eachother and went on a few dates to see if we can continue"I said
"And the dates were great so we ended up dating, right baby?"Ramona said
"Oh we are baby now"Kim said with a smirk
"Yes we are close to eachother"I said
We hear sound of the door opening and knives enter the house.
"Hi, sorry I'm late"knives said with a smile
"Hey knives "we all said
"Don't worry come here and we tell you what to do"Scott said
Knives sit beside Scott and he was going to explain how to cut the vegetables and he was a little worried how a 17 years child going to cut, and he was worried she might cut herself.
Before Scott could say anything knives pick up the knive and start cutting vegetables like a pro.
"Wow"Kim said
"Wow indeed you are really good"Ramona said
"Well my father taught me to fight with sword and knives but I also can use it for cutting vegetables"knives said with a smile
(Scott pov)
You have got to be kidding me, I wanted to be with her for little longer and then break up with her because she is really to young for me.
If I break her heart she might attack me, I need to be very gentle with her.
(MC pov)
The food is finally ready and we start eating and after a while in middle of eating, Stephen stands up.
"Everybody, I just wanted to say that our band is really grateful for everything Edward did for us"Stephen said
"No one would have go this far for the people they just met, but you Edward trusted us and give us a chance and we won't disappoint you "Stephen said and then sat again
No I'm just selfish, man he's making me feel bad because I really don't care about the band but honestly all I did for the band till now was easy for me.
"You really helped us Edward thank you"Scott said with smile
"Yeah we totally sucked before you"Kim said
"Come on we weren't that bad"Scott said
"Well guys I'm happy we could work together and no need to thanks me we are colleague"I said
"You are right, and I hope we become a great band"Stephan said
After that everything was normal, after eating Ramona and I say goodbye to them and Ramona open a door to her house and we enter Ramona house.
"You know those people aren't bad, I think I can be friends with them"Ramona said
"Well I'm happy"I said
"Okay let's go to sleep"Ramona said and she was going to change and then go to sleep but I grab her hand
"Ha? What is it Edward? Ramona asked with confuses face
"It's not late yet so let's see how you make it up for me, like you said"I said with a innocent smile
"Oh"Ramona understood
"Okay so what you want me to do"Ramona asked
(Ramona pov)
"Take of all your clothes"Edward said demanding me
"What"I asked with a little shock
"You heard me strip"he said in a demanding voice again
"Okay"I said and first take of my shirt and then my pants
Now I'm only wearing panties and a bra.
"All of your clothes"Edward said with a indifferent face
I never saw him act like this but I did say I will make it up for him.
I take off my bra and show him my tits and then I pull my panties down and now I'm completely naked in front of him.
Edward com close to me.
"Kneel"he said and I did
He grab my chin and make him look at him in the eyes, he looking down on me.
"Will you do anything I want?"he asked
"Well I "I said but couldn't finish my sentence because Edward slapped my face.
It's hurts why Edward slapped me.
"Will you do anything I want"he asked again, I see so this is what he wants and I'm not against it
"Yes"i said while feeling humiliated
"Good girl"he said and start to pat my head which made me feel good
He start to take of all of his clothes and then sit on the bed and open his leg and completely show his huge dick, honestly I feel his dick got bigger, I thought he wanted me to give him a blowjob but I was wrong.
"Come and sit between my legs"Edward said and I did
He started to touch my ear and then he start to lick my ear which surprises me lot he continue to do this and i start to feel hot.
"Are your nipples hard already?"he asked, they are hard already but I don't answer him
He grab my legs and open them.
"You're totally wet"he whispers to me
"Turn around "he said and I turned around
He start licking my neck and teasing my nipples which made my nipples really hard, he stop licking my neck and start eating and biting my nipples, I couldn't help but moan.
He stop and stand up.
"Suck it"he said to me like I'm some kind of whore which made me more excited
I start running my hand over his cock and then I start licking his dick.
It's hot and it throbbing, it's what I though when I'm licking his cock.
I open my mouth and put his dick in my mouth, I don't think I can fit his whole dick in my mouth anymore, i seriously think he's dick got bigger.
I start running my tongue all over his cock, i don't know when but I already start to spread my legs.
"Oh you are getting more wet now, come on spread them more, let's see it drip"Edward said which made feel ashamed, I really like how he treat me
He stop me and make me lie down on the bed and he comes to me and put his cock in front of my pussy and with his dick he start teasing me.
I can't believe we are going to have sex now but I don't have a problem with It.
He put he's dick inside me and still didn't completely put in but it's already touching my womb and then he start fucking me in missionary position.
"Ahhhh"I moan
"You look like it so much huh?"Edward said
"No I ahhhh"I couldn't finish because Edward start moving and thrust inside me
After what two minutes I think I think
"I'm cuming" I said with my lewd voice
"Already cuming? I barely even started here, you are adorable"he said and he continue to fuck me
"Wait let me rest"I said
"I won't, actually I'm gonna pick up the pace"he said
"N-no !"I said all I could say before starting to moan again
It's so much simulating if he keeps going like this.
"Ahhhhhhhh"I moan
This feels too good
"No! AHH! I'm cuming!"I said while having another orgasm
"Already came a second time?"he said and then he picked me up and start fucking me in the air
This position is completely pressure my womb.
"Ahhh"I moan non stop
After 20 minutes holding me and fucking me he still didn't let me down, doesn't he get tired?
This is bad.
"I'm cuming"I said
"You sure show how much you enjoying it"Edward said and throw me on the bed and start fucking me again
"Okay we are going wild "Edward said and he start fucking me even faster
"No! I'm telling you to stop AHHH!"I couldn't finish my sentence, honestly I don't want him stop.
I'm going to faint
"I'm cuming"I said with my eyes rolling
(MC pov)
"Amazing you're soaked"I said looking at Ramona who Is leaking a lot
"Are you pissing yourself?"I asked but Ramona doesn't answer
"It'd be a pain to pull out, I'll just keep going like this"I said
"Aah I can't I'm already "Ramona said but I don't care and just keep fucking her
(After 3 hours)
I still fucking Ramona and her moans filled the room.
"Want to go for another round ?"I asked
"NNA-AAAh"Ramona just moaned and I fuck her faster
"NOOOOOOOO!!"Ramona said and had a another orgasm
I already cum 6 times and every time i pull out and put my dick in Ramona mouth and cum inside her mouth.
(Ramona pov)
He start fucking me in doggy style and all I can do is moan like a bitch.
He spank me so hard, I think I'm starting to cry a little he also start to play and finger my anus, he said he wants to take my anal virginty, it's feel weird but I don't think I will hate it.
(Edward pov)
We fucked for another hour and I cum two times more and Ramona faint after my last loud in her mouth .
Well I think it's enough I can only cum 8 times with the stamina of a beast.
I hug Ramona and sleep.
(Next day)
(Ramona pov)
I open my eye and honestly my lower body is numb because of the last night.
Edward damn it he went so rough on me.
I look beside me and I don't see him, did he leave just like that?
I was going to become very angry but then the door opened and Edward comes inside with pancakes! And other things
"Good you are awake, I made pancakes for you"Edward said with a innocent smile
"Don't need to move, you can eat on the bed"Edward said
"I need to go to tha toilet but I can't feel my legs"I said
"Don't worry"Edward said and touch my legs and I think I got wet a little, I thought he was going for another round
"Heal"he said and I could feel my legs getting better, right he knows magic
"And I'm sorry if I went too far, last night"Edward said
"Well not everything was bad but I didn't expect to get slapped"I said
"Sorry it's also made me uncomfortable but I also got arouses me "Edward said
"Yeah I noticed"I said
"But you didn't hate it"Edward said with a teasing smile
"Well I admit I did enjoyed"I said even though he was rough I could feel he still care about me and never look things to extreme
"Okay now I'm better let me go to the toilet"I said and walk to the toilet
(MC pov)
Last night i was so horny that I didn't noticed how rough I went on her, it wasn't how I imagined our first time but this isn't a movie.
Still I'm happy she didn't get upset, well I remember she have a little masochism.
When I read her wiki I saw a version of her named slave Ramona, sure Gideon created but Ramona allow it so she have those fantasies.
Well slave Ramona doesn't exist anymore and even if it exist little but little I will conquer her body completely so I'm not really worried.
I also wanted to use alter self spell and have fun but Ramona and I were so tried so maybe later.
I bring the breakfast to table and Ramona come down and sit at the table and start eating.
"Well what is your plan for today"I asked
"Well I want to ask you to take me to the other world well I want to go shopping with Stacey"Ramona said
"Have fun"I said
"Wanna join us?"Ramona asked
"Ah well it's seem interesting but I need ah I need to train to defeat Lucas lee"I said making up exuce
"I thought you once said you are strong enough to defeat him"Ramona said
"I don't remember saying something like this"I said
"Yeah I believe you"Ramona said
"Okay I need to go see you later baby"I said and kisses her and walk fast toward the door
"Goodbye honey"Ramona said looking at me running from going shopping with her and Stacey
Come on I don't want to go shopping and with that though I fly towards the park to train
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Author:
Don't think because every woman is thinking Edward is handsome and they fall for him, they just suprised by his change and why Kim was getting wet well she said it, she haven't had sex for a while
Well Edward and Ramona finally had sex, it wasn't what I planned but I decided to just do it.
Did you like it?
Do you like to see more Edward pov or Ramona pov when they are fucking?
Do you want Edward pov and Ramona pov be equal?(Of course when they are having sex)
Well some of you maybe haven't read the comic but there is something inside Ramona head called slave Ramona and this is what I write about. Slave Ramona show Ramona desire to be with Gideon but he really didn't care about her until she leaves.
Slave Ramona is already destroyed now or it's going to be destroyed very soon with how Edward how Edward is going to give her pleasure.
