It's a great story for those who likes to watch themselves getting plowed by himself. Asides from that, I couldn't bring myself to like where things happening too, I mean way too fast. A week or a month interaction might be okay but a sentence. I'm sorry. And top of that this story is pure copy paste from the original with little changes.
bro is so down bad but he did what had to be done ion blame him
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at least he didn't keep plowing himself?
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It's not a masterpiece, but also quite a good story - something to read at weekend. Events aren't following fanatically canon - in fact, some changes are mind-boggling (fight with Zabuza, Orochimaru), even if they don't influence the rest of the story. Lemons and, generally speaking, hot stuff are a mixed bag of things. You can hate it or love it. To put it simply - Naruto uses clones in bed. Both for G@ng Bang no Jutsu, when he is with other people, as well as for alone games with his female clone. Some people hate it, but I personally find it honest and hot. The worst part of the story is grammar - it's not that bad, everything is understandable, but I have a feeling that the quality of language is falling with the chapter's progress. The most common and annoying thing is changing point of view between 'I' and Naruto.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Buena fic!! Uno de los mejores fics de naruto en la actualidad ¡¡Buen desarrollo y diseño de personajes!! Y muy divertido!! (Casi me muero de la risa con el primer comentario de Kurama sobre mc) ¡¡No os preocupéis por los sombrereros!!
Where did you get the cover picture? It looks good. By the way, when are you going to update the story? It's a good story so please continue writing. Thanks for a good story and keep up the good work!
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I liked your fanfic, the part about the kagebunshin was a bit strange but in itself, not bad, reading is not tedious for me, it's a great point, good job and continue with the fanfic, if you get bored of writing just end with a epilogue (married hinata, sakura, tenten etc and had many children)
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Muy buena la historia sigue así casi no hay historia de esta forma como la hace además de que Naruto valla aprendiendo forma más adecuada de aprender 👏👏👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Very good, very good I recommend it, very good the way he uses the clones is perfect, ignore the negative comments because they are made by people without culture
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Hey, is this dropped... 😢 ....................................................................................................................................
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