A really unique story If I have to say, but the problem is imagine u are riding a bike and enjoying the scenery but suddenly ur bike turned into a rocket and u reached ur destination in mere seconds. Just *** was that??? at least make it a 100 chps bro I believe it was wayyyy to haste to end it like that. and the real, REAL problem? My fav girl didn't get enough screen time!!!!!
It started out as a story with a lot of potential... But after the addition of the "system" everything went downhill. I'm not saying that the very concept of the system is bad. It's just that most writers can't handle it. Unfortunately...
J'avais hésité à lire avec toute ses mauvaise critique, mais en fait, c'est pas mal, rien à voir avec ce que certains rageux disent, juste dommage que ce soit si court.
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Good fic!! One of the best naruto fics nowadays Good development and character desing!! And really funny!! (I almost died laughing on Kurama's first commentary on mc) Dont mind the hatters!! Please, dont drop!!!!
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