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I have to give this 5 stars for now it's a little fast-paced for me but I can't understand why it's so fast-paced at the moment because he wants to get the real story rather than waiting around for 25 chapters to get the Mind Stone
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Cuckold warning. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️😀✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
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mmann I caught up and gotta say it's good man the chapters are satisfying cause it's long🤣 though sometimes its hard to swallow the whole chapter in one sitting because I've gotten used to majority of novels being short. It would be fun to see reactions or POV's of other characters though just a suggestion but it's been a blast reading thanks!
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To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE also all his family members with it, But make them act in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC's child be twins a Son and a Daughter-( a DAUGHTER who carries both father and mother powers and DNA also being Genies) but Make MC's SON better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP, his Children's and also a bit of power up to Cap. Marvel as his wife to always remain only below or equal to him. Thanks- Reader!
Many bad review because the MC got betrayed by his gf. But the overall story quality is good, and each chapter has good word count maybe 2k or more.
Its pretty good. People should have some amount of maturity to read this how ever! Don’t let the immature reviewers push you guys away. Honestly. If you read prn and can’t differentiate between this and a NTR story, that’s a shame.
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Romance muito bom, cada vez fica melhor, o autor é muito bom, esperando ansiosamente por mais capitulos. Romance muito bom, cada vez fica melhor, o autor é muito bom, esperando ansiosamente por mais capitulos. Romance muito bom, cada vez fica melhor, o autor é muito bom, esperando ansiosamente por mais capitulos.
Goste da história , então dei 5 estrelas , DUH j j
Ótima fanfic ..........................................................................................................................................
Ótima história , é envolvente e mostra uma reação mais realista aos tipos de absurdos completamente ridículos e estúpidos que universos ficcionais como os da Marvel continua à mostrar . Foi exatamente para esse tipo de realidade ambientadas em versos de "Herói vs. Vilão" que eu comecei a ler fanfics em primeiro lugar .
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