Well a shameless review by my side ๐ ๐ ๐ . But don't be sad my friends, you can all join the legendary shameless group by asking me about all of your questions about this book.
gonna give you 5 star for you translating it into better version... remember to keep releasing 5extra ch every new week so new people could see what you are translating..
I'm addicted to this one and Can't wait to see more of it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The writing quality is alright. Although some of the early chapters had a problem. Especially the spacing. Love the author and will support this fanfic! Still, shipping zhu zhuqing to the mc!
Good story so far~ need moreeeee[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The main character is very funny, especialy with the ways he irritates people. The grammar isn't the best but its understandable. Most of all, even though its excessively used, I just love the sharingan.
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well a good start. lets see where the story goes. ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
what happened ? why it is stopped .. it was good
You keep making mc use the Sharingan for trivial matters and because it shows a lot, it becomes boring and predictable. And provoking his enemies in a childish way like (what did you guys hear a dog barking) I also see as a viewer that MC does not have any privacy or ambiguity, which reminds you that MC is from another world and knows the future, which in turn gives you suspense and looking forward to the next as you spoil it more in the future You complicate things a lot Although it does not require that
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Yea... I think I'm gonna need more Duoluo Dalu FF... It was the first Chinese manhua I read... And God... It was so Good... So much nostalgia.
I really like this story good story Please update more. And the progression of the story is good, interesting to follow, amazing. I'll wait to follow up.
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I am at chapter 17, its good so far, I am quite interested to see how the mc will gain power after leaving the village and weather he can get points from spirit beasts.
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EXELLENT story I really hope you can continue and finish this story because itโs one of the best Iโve come across in this page and I really think that we need more good Douluo Dalu fics on the level of this jewel. So please PLEASE I beg you not to drop it.