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In Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System

Author: EdwardElite
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EdwardElite
EdwardEliteAuthor

Well a shameless review by my side ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…. But don't be sad my friends, you can all join the legendary shameless group by asking me about all of your questions about this book.

M1n0
M1n0Lv7

gonna give you 5 star for you translating it into better version... remember to keep releasing 5extra ch every new week so new people could see what you are translating..

KumaKumaDaoist
KumaKumaDaoistLv2

I'm addicted to this one and Can't wait to see more of it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Sondre
SondreLv13

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ManGanu
ManGanuLv5

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Daoist_Nyanko_Bub
Daoist_Nyanko_BubLv10

The writing quality is alright. Although some of the early chapters had a problem. Especially the spacing. Love the author and will support this fanfic! Still, shipping zhu zhuqing to the mc!

asaqapa
asaqapaLv13

Good story so far~ need moreeeee[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Shift_Power
Shift_PowerLv4

The main character is very funny, especialy with the ways he irritates people. The grammar isn't the best but its understandable. Most of all, even though its excessively used, I just love the sharingan.

Lazy_Ryuu
Lazy_RyuuLv2

please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more! please update more!

Don_Don_8817
Don_Don_8817Lv2

well a good start. lets see where the story goes. ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

George_Amil
George_AmilLv4

what happened ? why it is stopped .. it was good

Aizen_81
Aizen_81Lv1

You keep making mc use the Sharingan for trivial matters and because it shows a lot, it becomes boring and predictable. And provoking his enemies in a childish way like (what did you guys hear a dog barking) I also see as a viewer that MC does not have any privacy or ambiguity, which reminds you that MC is from another world and knows the future, which in turn gives you suspense and looking forward to the next as you spoil it more in the future You complicate things a lot Although it does not require that

DaoistPNHB63
DaoistPNHB63Lv1

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F_E_X_A
F_E_X_ALv11

Yea... I think I'm gonna need more Duoluo Dalu FF... It was the first Chinese manhua I read... And God... It was so Good... So much nostalgia.

Lilia_Sanberrie
Lilia_SanberrieLv1

I really like this story good story Please update more. And the progression of the story is good, interesting to follow, amazing. I'll wait to follow up.

Albert_Stare
Albert_StareLv1

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USE1SAINZ
USE1SAINZLv2

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watch_donghua
watch_donghuaLv4

I am at chapter 17, its good so far, I am quite interested to see how the mc will gain power after leaving the village and weather he can get points from spirit beasts.

Don_Don_8817
Don_Don_8817Lv2

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OromisEldaGlaedr
OromisEldaGlaedrLv3

EXELLENT story I really hope you can continue and finish this story because itโ€™s one of the best Iโ€™ve come across in this page and I really think that we need more good Douluo Dalu fics on the level of this jewel. So please PLEASE I beg you not to drop it.