Reviews of Imposter System
Imposter System
Pill_Guy
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I really like how MC is not an idiot and take decision with his brain rather than emotion Just don't drop the novel As a long time reader I can say that if you want to be in the ranking then you have mass release chapter at the start of the novel and after 50-60 chapter you can tone it down to 1 chapter per day
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Iโm usually harsh with my opinion when it comes to novels, however Iโve noticed that there are a few authors who are blessed with a creative mind and can overwhelm my critiques actually most of the time novels arent even worth giving my opinion on so the fact that i came across this while its in its early stages is something i am thankful for, iโd love to read more. :)
PILATE: What's ๐ฆ so... funny ๐ about ๐ฆ 'Sussus Amongus'? CENTURION: Well ๐ฆ, it's a joke ๐ name ๐, sir ๐จ. PILATE: I ๐ have a vewy ๐ gweat ๐ fwiend ๐ in Wome ๐๐จ called โ 'Sussus Amongus'. GUARD ๐ #4 ๐ฆ: chuckling PILATE: Silence ๐! What is all ๐ฏ this insolence โ? You ๐ will find ๐โ yourself in gladiator ๐๐ป school ๐ซ vewy ๐ quickly ๐๐ป๐จ with wotten behavior ๐ฏ like ๐๐ that. BRIAN ๐๐ฆ: Can I ๐ go ๐๐ด now, sir ๐จ? slap ๐ Aaah ๐ซ๐! Eh ๐ฉ. PILATE: Wait โ till ๐ฅ Sussus Amongus hears ๐ of this. GUARD ๐ฎโโ๏ธ #4 ๐ฆ: chuckling PILATE: Wight โ ! Take ๐ him ๐ด away ๐! CENTURION: Oh ๐, sir ๐จ, he ๐จ๐ฟ-- he ๐ฅ only-- PILATE: No ๐ , no ๐ฃ. I ๐ want ๐ him ๐ด fighting ๐ฅ๐ wabid, wild ๐ป animals ๐บ within ๐๐ ฐ a week ๐. CENTURION: Yes โ , sir ๐จ. Come ๐ฆ on ๐, you ๐. GUARD ๐ #4 ๐ฆ: Ha ๐ ha ๐ haa ๐ ha ๐คฃ, ha ๐ ha ๐ ha ๐. Hooo ๐ ๐ผ hooo ๐ ๐ผ hoo ๐ฃ hoo ๐ฃ. Hoo ๐ hoo ๐... PILATE: I ๐ will not have my fwiends ๐ฅ widiculed by the common ๐ฉ soldiewy ๐โโ๏ธ. Anybody ๐ง๐ด๐ป๐จ else ๐ฉ feel ๐๐๐ like ๐ a little ๐... giggle ๐... when ๐ I ๐ mention ๐ my fwiend ๐... Sussus... GUARD ๐๐ฏ #1 โ: chuckling PILATE: ...Amongus? GUARD ๐ #1 โ: chuckling PILATE: What about ๐ฆ you ๐? Do you ๐ find ๐ it... wisible... when โฐ I ๐ say ๐ฌ the name ๐๐... 'Sussus'... GUARD ๐ #3 ๐ฑ: chuckle ๐๐๐ PILATE: ...'Amongus'? GUARD ๐ #1 ๐ and GUARD ๐ #2 ๐: chuckling PILATE: He ๐จ๐พโโ๏ธ has a wife ๐ฐ, you ๐๐ป know ๐ค. You ๐ know ๐ค what she's ๐ฉ๐ฝ called ๐? She's ๐ง called ๐ฒ... 'Ventia'. 'Ventia Impostoris'. GUARDS ๐๐ฏ: laughing ๐๐ฐ
Writing Quality, 5 star. If anyone tried to argue with this statement, I don't know what quality of writing you're used to. Story development, 5 star. Not forced and everything is logical. The changes in Matt's mindset is gradual and not sudden that it will disgust the readers. Character design, 5 star. The protagonist has this instinct of what specie he is right now, unlike most of the novel where goblins (MC) didn't have the slightest goblin mindset. Also, his changes are good, it's so natural that sometimes I feel that the character is alive. All of the characters are well designed. There's nothing I can complain so I give it 5 star. Updating stability, 4 star. I know that writers have real life to deal with, but posting nothing after 2 weeks seems sus. I checked his other works and I noticed that many of them have been dropped. I really like this work, so please don't drop this too. Also, if I'm not new in this novel, I might've rated this as 3 star. World Background, 5 star. The mixed of the space game that some of the readers mentioned and reality makes this story interesting. Function of facilities and some things are described properly, I'm mentioning this because some novel are full of bs. Overall, I highly recommend this novel among the people who love Sci-fi, Non-human MC, Romance, Evolution, Weak to strong MC, and logical MC. I usually don't like romance but humans like exception. This is one of the 3 romance novels I've been reading, so I really recommend this!
This is an excellent novel that has many twists making it unique in comparison to other books. Exception grammar coupled with above-average vocabulary use. The author's wording contributes to the feeling of mystery surrounding the ship and the character's quest for information that is not accessible to him (for the sake of his survival). Despite the world that he transmigrated into being very similar to one of the games he played, it remains just that: Very similar. A part of the novel's immersive quality is the smaller details which tell us that he was transmigrated into a world that differentiates from the game he used to play (Essentially meaning he isn't an omniscience being that knows all within this new world.) The one thing I love about these characters is that they like pancakes which are flat but are instead fleshed out. This novel is an excellent example of how side characters are meant to contribute to the main character in unique and meaningful ways. The only negative aspect of this novel is the release date, being 10 chapters a month (roughly every 3 days). However, as far as I can tell, only one person is working on this, and that person is doing an incredible job, so I have no complaints. I let it rest for a few months so I could stack the chapters, so I've got lots to catch up on. TL;DR: Excellent story, superb writing, fleshed-out characters, GIVE IT A READ.
Best novel ever read till now, not joking The setting is quite small but incredibly complex while the characters are more mature and complex than many other stories. I especially like the thrill that continues from the first chapters till now (46) The idea of the system is quite mainstream but well rearranged I suggest all of you give it a try even if you are tired of the boring system stories or you don't like sci-fi
Sus. Well, in all seriousness, I haven't been this invested in a story for quite a while. This story leaves me wondering what's next; it makes me think, and it immerses me more effectively than a lot of the stories I've read. I actually feel like I can cheer Matt on, because I find myself excited for him. The author executes emotional parts super effectively, too; I rarely ever feel anything meaningful from stories, but this one pulled those feelings from me. Excited to see what's next.
Wow. This is surprisingly a really good novel from what is written so far. This is definitely among the best originals on the site. It looks like a cheap Among Us impostor but turned out to be its own unique novel. Itโs got just enough familiarity but is written with a surprising amount of depth and detail. The character development and relationships are done quite well and donโt feel forced. Iโm really looking forward to more. Keep up the good work, Author-kun.
