Update review: great story, but we still dont know what the mc is doing? He seems to be the evil mc since he sent 50 people to suicide, but the thing brothering me the most is that he doesnt have an objective and ambition.. He is trying to build an empire I guess, but why? Why did he decide to build an empire? Why did he decide to go against the government, because he want to overturn the planet for his empire? Why is he trying to create an empire, what is his ambition? And dont tell me that it's because of *******, because it's clear he isn't going on for *******. Freedom seems less than 10% important now since Freedom =/= Building an empire and being the enemy of the whole world
Keep going author. 2 of your novels is in my library so keep going. and I love the star wars fan fic novel of yours. The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.just a additional word count.
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This Ian just my kind of story, I’ve yet to really disagree with the mc, he is ruthless and manipulative, it feels nice for a change, he feels like he knows it all and is smart. The story progress at a slow-moderate speed, but the attention to detail in some chapters really sell the story, you should keep writing