Victor_Vaden
Hello, everyone. Giving the first five-star review to my book cuz, why not? And also cause I believe in it too. Anyway, let me tell you a bit about the book itself...or rather a few things to expect; > Mc will have character growth, so he ain't perfect from the start. > Mc has the advantage of having read many cultivation novels. That should give you a hint of how that could help himđ that's all for now, hope you read it!
Author I am loving the story and Hope to read it more in the future[img=recommend][img=update]. Though I want to ask is there a Discord server. For Character illustration(if there is any) And, Is there a chapter where it mentions cultivation Realms and the like. As I am at the end of Vol 1, I want to if there is anything like that for future reference while reading, as there is a chance that I might forget some So it would be helpful if there was a separate chapter describing Cultivation Realms.
The story in general is quite good, with decent pacing and character development. However it sometimes feels repetitive with almost the exact same sequence of events almost being copied and pasted between story arcs. The MC is generally written well but sometimes there can be points where he seems stupid. In general the side characters seem to be given some development also, which is good to see rather than them just appearing for two chapters and the gone from all existence in the story.The only major criticism I have is the upload continuity of the author as initially the story was uploaded 2 chapters daily, then it dropped to 2 every other day then had a large absence, tho I believe this was due to the author's health. Now we have been without a release for a prolonged time again so I would encourage patients if you want to read this story.