Kirbyisgreen
{I will just say that for the sake of fairness.} In the first 100 chapters or so, I was thinking about how to make a review of the annoying things inside the novel...but now I don't think I need to do that. ........................................... For the first few chapters, you will get a feeling similar to those xxx based novel (like The MC was just going to collect women to xxx after that with some lose storyline and cheesy dialogue between the MC and those 1 or 2 dimension women) but after more than 50 chapters I get to understand the difference and the hidden beauty of this novel it completely has no relationship with the first impression you get, it's starting with the typical way of other xxx novels but after few chapters, you get a glimpse of great story, you can even see the difference between each disciple and their feeling and come to understand the MC more and know why he would do this, and sometimes you will find how annoying the second disciple when she disrespects him even though he is the master but eventually you found the reason for all that and then come to an astonishing discovery and it was all about a beautiful story filled with romance and comedia to be able to get a family and building feeling...yes there are many disciples and all of them had a regular xxx with the MC but each one of them had been hiding her insecurity deeply inside their hearts and even the MC will have some enlightenment about his feelings and his thinking about them. Simply it is about how they will grow to truly love each other, and build their forces and family. And the most important part of all this is that there will be no young arrogant master here and there at least not in the same way and even when you think that the MC is going to have a hard time ahead of him you will find that all this worry is for nothing.....because all those supposed to be a dangerous situation ends up with unexpected ways with much damage to the MC. In the end, it's a beautiful and lighthearted novel with much love and xxx.
Its really nice reading it and i hope all of its harem member remane loyal to him and also grow alongside as they become more powerfull. If possible every harem member get as much as possible screen time with mc and have romance. Also i would like mc to also grow stronger and not only his discipline........
Really quite nice. The writing quality is good for the most part, only having some occasional errors. Updates are regular, about once or twice per day usually. The story development leaves much to be desired though, but this isn't really a story-driven novel, and I'd much rather read about some more "plot", so it works out in the end. The characters are engaging and interesting, but I'd like to learn a bit more about them and their ideals. Not much has been said about them other than some surface-level stuff, but I guess that can come later on since there aren't that many chapters out currently. The world background is nice, though the cultivation system is a bit basic so far. I'd like to see it expanded on and improved. Overall, pretty good stuff with a nice "plot". TLDR; Writing quality: 4/5 (Only some occasional errors) Stability of updates: 5/5 (Usually one chapter per day, sometimes two) Story development: 3/5 (More "plot" than plot.) Character design: 4/5 (Only surface-level information is given about the main characters, but that could change later on.) World background: 3/5 (Cultivation system is a bit too basic and boring.)
Amazing I like the story .. And the harem .. I hope I can find a novel similar like this Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej
Well what should I say you should read it yourself it's a very great story it has a very good start and the story develop is also great. The characters are good not too bad not too good it is a very stable plot does not go very high or low it it also has haram mature stuff everyone should read it I say and it's great very great you should read it.
Everything is good so far, i m liking how things are progressing, hope it keeps going like that 😀 I have my doubts on First disciple, her cultivation is based on orgasm, and now she manages whore house, and how she use vibrator all the time, due to this there's always insecure feeling, she might betray MC in future. I hope author don't do any NTR stunt here, lol😅
I am left slightly slack-jawed by how much depth a, I thought, smut can have. The world background is expansive and is still being flushed out but given enough hints to know there is so much more in store. The writing quality scores high in it's grammar, diction and flow. Updates are good. All in all a great book and not one I was expecting to be hooked on 👍🏾