It was a decent one for a couple of hundred chapters. One would have expected a weird sect like that of MC where all his disciples are his lovers without exception given the title, but what was really weird is that he did not have a single lover before becoming an immortal and now he almost behaves as a *** maniac. Ignoring all this, the story was a light and enjoyable read at the start. Then author starting writing another book and updates to this one became slow as a snail. So I skipped reading for a few months and came back to it. The latest chapters (200-240) have the first so-called "war" supposedly orchestrated by the MC. Long planning, execution running into nearly 40 chapters. The end result was that couple of (irrelevant) underlings of the main characters were killed, MC sneak attacked to kill a few of the competitors of his disciples who have been more-or-less engaged in a fair competition, and thousands/millions of bystander humans killed. I had thought that this whole scheme was to somehow kill the main perpetrators and beast traitors, but the above mentioned end result was perfectly in accordance with MC's plans. So MC managed to kill a couple of characters who are largely irrelevant, who were weaker than MC anyway and who could have been killed by some planned ambushes. Oh, and even the son of one of the main perpetrators was not killed because apparently it would bring a lot of trouble. So overall MC thought of this brilliant idea of orchestrating a huge war just to sneak attack these useless characters, killing thousands/millions of "ant mortals" in the process and even endangering his other body, wife and child. Go figure.
Good story so far...so much enjoyable. Every disciple has their unique character. Sex scenes are very good. But it also have a good plot that it doesnt bore you and it isnt full of bull**** like some other novels... All in all...I am enjoying it very much ...Keep up the good work Auther...It has a lot of potential as it has just started 20 days ago...Give it some time and it will have a lot of Readers....
On Chapter Ten so far, and the writing quality is pretty nice. It flows smoothly and the errors aren't common & only found if you are looking for them. The updates so far have been very stable, and I hope this pattern continues :D. With two waifu's acquired in the first 10 chapters I'd say the development is going steady, and I like the differences in the characteristics that they have. World Background is classic, no complaints. Highly Recommend, 5/5
Great Novel I will probably do a lengthy review next time but for now i have a class coming soon. Anyways This here is my all time fav fantasy novel. No not because it has seggs( that's just a small part of the reasons") The way the story sets up is just brilliant. Idk if it's because I watch a lot of chinese martial arts drama when I was young but this novel is exactly how I imagine things to be. The Mc is exactly my type! maybe a bit too perverted but not to the point of being ridiculous and intolerable. He is serious when needed and takes good care of his harem. In a lot of harem stories the mc usually neglects his harem most of the time needless to say the plot rarely revolves around them But here there's a specific arc dedicated for each of the harem member. Not a quick grab like pokemon go. The characters are well fleshed out and their feelings are so relatable that I often forget they are fictional characters. This is probably the most realistic harem that we can get to say the least. Sorry my eng is not that good so I can't really describe well how I am feeling for this novel. All I can say is this is my fav. Again thank u author I know you are doing this for free and treat it as a part of your hobby but I really hope u can give your time and keep publishing chapters for me. I really want to support you but I am from a middle class family from a very poor country so my pocket money(i'm a student) would not be as near as 1/69th the amount that u need to buy some good food. I swear when I get rich I will donate u huge sums of money because after all You Are My Favourite Author of My Favourite Book. :) much love from Burma
Very Very nice. The writing quality is awesome, Updates are regular, about once or twice per day usually. Love the story and the plot line. Plot is slowly raveling. The characters are engaging and interesting. Also, The world background is nice. I'd like the story expanded on and improved. Overall, pretty good stuff with a nice "plot".
I am loving the novel so far... The master-disciple relationships feel very geniune and not forced... The only downside of the novel is every young master or immortal like to use force... We know they maybe a few people like that but most powerful people would see that type of behaviour beneath them... They would use money and luxury items to charm the woman/man they want to get into their pants... Wish the author would correct that part because its becoming a repetative, uninspired novel... The MC cann't be the only one out of the scores of cultivators who want romance over forceful interactions... That would ruin the novel...
The story is nice and fun to read. It doesn't have many characters introduced so far which makes it easy to know who's who. The main character is interesting, sort of relatable with his wacky traits. The MC's lovers which contain 3 primary waifu's, are all different from each other, with different origins, although not too spectacular or interesting it's believable. Chen Wentian also got 5 secondary waifu's, but they're pretty basic tbh. One problem would be that while the MC is pretty strong considering he is an Immortal he doesn't experience breakthroughs whatsoever, well from how far I've read. The waifu's though have been going through their cultivation like a breeze. Another might be how there doesn't seem to be much backstory about the MC but that might just make it too similar to most other novels that go through the whole cultivate from the bottom. It would be better if the MC is just hiding his powers but is lowkey the strongest in the Realm, but of course he doesn't flaunt it. Besides that the novel is once again a nice read, as it's relatively different from most novels I've read from this site.
It is diamond, you need to dig it up and read it. I actually like a lot from world building, writing quality etc. its all somehow good. Except the first disciple heroine, its all good. His first disciple is a nah, not really good, from her story to her cultivation its all weird and somehow I didnt like it at all. I think its better if her power from something else, nah... just my opinion. Anyways, overall its good novel. Read it at least and support the author. ~All Hail Me