Young and Dry
I read a bit ahead. interesting premise, but writer isn't very talented so it is an average story. stuff will get repetitive after a while. basically power leveling and then enter a new graduation and more power leveling. also around 200, they meet japanese people. I haven't read past yet but xenophobic butthurt is probably coming soon.
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The story is quite good but the translate is really bad, idk if its like that on the raw but i think its the translate, the level of talent, martial artist and fierce beast is so confusing, the same words are being used for different level and the talent level is being told with different words, like at first its said weak, inferior, medium, high, then its said elementary, secondary, medium, etc Fierce beast level is like fierce beast, fierce beast, medium fierce beast, etc, its so confusing Same as the martial artist, its said martial artist, then martial artist, then elite martial artist, then sometimes its said martial disciple
Just asking but why are the editors/translatirs slacking so much like its a good novel so i will give it my honest opinion but seriously you still knly have 10 chapters out well anyway you better fix this fast as this has made a lot of people angry(and yes i know they are updating chapters for other trial reads but seriously this one only has 10)anyway rant Soooooooo Its a good novel but it aint amazing either so yeah done