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There exist 4 types of living settlement size. From lowest being village, town, city, metropolis.

There exist's 8 classes in immortal plain's: Swordsman, Guardian, Spearman, Assassin, Archer, Summoner, Magician and Priest.

Weapon rank's are: Trash, Common, Rare, Unique, Legendary and Unknown.

For alchemy their exist 10 rank's of pill's from one to ten