Idol (Second Chance)

Jae Pierce, a korean-American dreaming to become a k-pop idol. He ruined his only chance at fame. He got the talent but not the looks. He trained himself, no one helped because they thought he could not make it. One night he died staring at the full moon ______________________________________________ Watch how Jae got reborn and get his chance with a system as his teacher. Please comment if you have any ideas. This an idea, if you want to write this story just comment and tell me. I could give you some feedback or tips.