Time for the Author's Shameless Review First of all, this novel is somewhat inspired by Shadow Hack. Some already pointed out the similarity. I know. The premise is almost like it. However apart from that the whole story will be the different. If I can say something about the plot... It's the Interstellar Era and you can expect huge Universe, Planet Hopping, Mecha, Conspiracy behind the scenes, Galactic Empires/different Huge Factions and their Machinations, Business Tycoon, Army Building, Mystery about who granted the System to the MC and a lot more. I want to list more but that's the preview for now. Here, you can expect the MC to be somewhat emotional when he's alone. He will question things, overthink things, be agitated at what is presented to him but in the end, he will calm himself down on his own. He's a Realist who will eventually accept things as he progressed. He is a complete nobody at the start. No hidden lineage or no hidden inheritance. He still has a complete family that will soon be somewhat significant to his growth. He will have his own romantic encounters but that's not the focus at the start. If you are aware of my other novel, Stealing Spree, there's a possibility to have a sm*t in the future. But that is totally optional. Side characters will also be significant. His ordinary friends will not be forgotten even if he already stepped up to a new stage or he's already high up in the ladder. As for his System, although it's bound to him, it will not be like the other Systems who will exist inside his mind or body. It will always be detached and he can only access it through a PC or his phone or if there are more devices that can replace those two in the future. The System will feature a lot of different Idle Game genre. If you're aware of them then you can expect a lot of them as the IDLE Database is like a collection of that. Although you might be somewhat disappointed of the Math as I will make them simple. Nonetheless, the games will be the crucial part on how the MC will grow. MC is not a genius or a talent so he will be utilizing the system to his utmost. Expect Action Scenes, Mecha Battles and Wars. Ah. Perhaps I already repeated some of that so I will end this here. If you have any questions, please do ask me in the comment section and I will answer it to the best of my understanding.
Great, straight and very stable book so far... Not sure it will reach the great heights of author's previous books but it is going along well... Would have been unique if his Dimensional Clones were connected by a hive mind to the first clone... And as he improve he would have to improve his brainwave... This way the Dimensional Clones feel unique and not like every other clone out there...
3 chapters in and we are getting a lot of info-dumping. The grammar and spelling are pretty good and there is no problem there but the story already seems like its stagnating. There are a lot of words but they don't really give anything to the story and it just feels like wasted space. Some details could be squished down into one paragraph but it seems like the author extended it into multiple. I love the concept and the setup but if Im already getting annoyed at the unnecessary info now then I doubt i could take it later on.
Hey man, I've read the story soo far and although the concepts are not completely new, and a little inspired by Shadow Hack,, but still it's pretty good.. nothing over the top hacks and stable character and story development! Nothing like the stories coming at this time where MC is completely OP and faces no challenges coz that just takes the fun out of it !! Looking forward to the story, hope you won't disappoint !!