Flavored Lollipop
Do we have any idea what the raw is for this one? Because it's quite clearly a totally different story(or possibly two or three) which the editor has randomly smashed into unrecognizable trash with the consistency of diarrhea. I'm quite interested in finding out just how terrible this editor is at this by reading the free chapters of the raw, even if it's faloo.
π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π© look at the overall ratings nuff said.
What else should i say? I only last for a couple of chapters. Some of the scenes were mismatch. I just want to read it'll save me from thinking too much but now im thinking too much ughh author sama should edit this book again. OP but not quite that OP as it says. Rain hate on me but you can't blame my dislike for this book. Edit some scenes that confuses people and this might pass as good.
A perverted Chinese novel, the beautiful and gentle sister cries with great sadness as if she has lost the world to the death of her hero brother who becomes a fish, with time they will fall in family love A disgusting thing, a family aberration always The author has a beautiful mother, a smart sister Lolita, a sexy aunt, a big breasted aunt, that's how he imagines The author is a family harem
There are way too many mistakes in the writing quality and the story is trying too hard to seem like a VR but then completely switches at a random point to PC. The entire story makes no sense, it is supposed to be the year 2090 with a VR game but instantly slipped further back in time closer really to our current time period being on PC. Overall it's just a try hard story with very bad writing that makes no sense at all
Author focuses more on providing details of each and every villain MC fights. Keeps on adding repetitive description of artifact's and weapons which makes majority of of a chapter's content and less of character/story development. Author should focus on story and character development instead of repetitive and filler contents.
unoriginal, bland, boring, and confusing. the world is the same MMORPG all of these types of novels use, the plot is a mix of the 'the game fuses with the real word' and 'man goes back in time to play game, ends up fighting billion-dollar corporation', both of which are terribly done. the plot isn't interesting, as it's easy to predict, and the characters amount to best friends since age 2 who get motivated to change their ways and be more serious, and girl who idolizes mc in-game without knowing she yelled at him in real life. not only that, the author describes the game like it's a virtual reality game where the gamers go into a pod and only play with their consciousness, like rebirth of the thief, but then says it's a game played with a keyboard and mouse on a computer. it's just bad.