Xiao_Huoyan
Aweome story. Keep up the excellent work, bro (or sis?). English is great, characters are compelling. Jin Long is such an amazing father figure. The protagonist has a lot of potential too, and I can't wait to see him finally break out on his own. Not sure what's the bit about his mother, that part was confusing because he claims that he didn't see her get killed by the mercenaries, so...okay? But we all know he's gonna destroy them. Maybe.
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Love how mysterious everything is! I don't know what's gonna happen I just know that I'll LOVEEE IITTTT!!!!πππ PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND DON'T DROP THIS CAUSE ITS SUPEER AMAZIIINGG!!!!!!π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»π»
Hellooooo! For those of you who doesn't know or dear authour have put in her snapchat username in her profile so that anyone can contact her through snapchat. She's openly making friends with unknown people and I likeeee itttt! I am going to add her on snapchat because she seems nice and for those of you who would want to befriend our dear author, I think you should add her tooooooo! Most people will probably think I'm crazy or sumthing but whatever! Love you authour, keep up the good work!πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Hey Xiao Huoyan! I know I have already made a reviw before but I just wanted to make another one to cheer you up! That guy who insulted you and said he hoped you would die in the comments, he can go and f*ck himself! To tell stuff like that to other people is just insane! I hope you won't take it to heart and instead be happu about your readers who really like your work! Keep up the good work and don't feel discouraged! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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