Perverted_Fella
Hi, Author here... I'm writing an honest review here. This is my third work, and to be honest, I wrote this novel as just a fun and relaxing debauched vampire novel because of my liking for MVS. There's nothing much to expect from it for the plot maniacs. It's written in the first person pov, so it might be a little weird when reading it. furthermore, the plot progression is super sluggish (remember, I wrote it for fun.) And lastly, I can guarantee you good mid-tier grammar that won't make your brain steam.
While this novel is currently in it's beginning stages as I write this review, I only have one word I can use to describe it. Superb! The storyline is a great mix of what we know of in usual dungeon novels alongside new and fresh ideas concerning coexistence between humans and other races. The POV is also very interesting and refreshing to read. I can already see the cu*khold waiting to happen. Aurora is already my fav, though MC sis is a close second due to the... milk... hehe I'm sure there'll be good lemon with MC's girlfriend too. I can't wait! In any case, I look forward to this novel. Well done, author!
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
First Impression Review : I only read 10 chapters, I know. but... Although the world development and other staff are good, there are some incoherency with character's characteristics, like, some minutes ago Misty thinks of MC as a kid, but the next moment out of nowhere she starts feeling lovey-dovey towards MC like a lover. And this is the reason that made me lose my interest in this novel. I think, at least for Starting, "Bad Luck System" was better than this novel, although that novel was not perfect, i wanted more chapters of that novel.