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a good read, also loli mc, that said, i always wondered why the rating in this site is so ridiculous compared to other sites, either rated too high or too low. now i know, its this stupid review system that require that you write an essay just to give a score, so its only those who hate or love the novel that vote and not 95% of people who wont bother rating due to it being too bothersome.
The grammar is flawless with little to no error. Sentence and paragraph flow could be improved a bit, but that is a minor nitpick. The story is intriguing and draws one in. It has decent pace and won’t run one over with plot points nor get bogged down with descriptions of the second and fourth tree of a random mountain. Definitely worth trying at least ten chapters and thirty if one has the time. I hope the author will continue writing the story and I look forward to its completion.
Enjoy reading this on a daily basis. The characters are very realistic and reasonable, with complex relationships. The world building and the rules are simple to understand, but has a lot of depth to it, which help new ideas seem logical and narural. From the occasional mistyped he/she pronouns it's a smooth read that gets you hooked. Really progressing well, cannot wait for further development. Keep up the great work.
This novel earns a 4.4 out of 5 stars from me. Because I don't see anyone else providing a detailed review of this novel, I'm going to write one myself, and I hope that the author isn't offended by the criticism that I provide. To begin, I would like to state that I am not a big fan of stories that have a fast plot. I much prefer to read in a more relaxed manner, and I don't want to have my head spinning with information dumps, which most authors who write stories with fast plots tend to do. So that readers like me will find it less enjoyable when we want to get into the story and be confused by new characters that keep appearing and events that keep changing rapidly. This will make the story less enjoyable overall. I want to ask, at the beginning of the story, the main character made a risky move with all of the knowledge she had, despite the fact that she was not permitted to injure or even kill other people unless her own life was in danger. Does this imply that she is only permitted to react if a rock comes dangerously close to hitting his head? In addition to all of that, the aspect of this novel that I enjoyed the most was the interaction between the characters. In addition, the consistency of the updates was excellent. The author did a great job.