Sixth
Gotta say I loved this story. Between world design and character design, Sixth really did a wonderful job setting an entertaining stage to tell a great story. If there's any complaint... its the last ten chapters or so. It becomes rather obvious that the author's desire to tell their story had diminished. To say the ending is rushed is like saying a bullet train is fast. Altogether the story is wonderful, its just that when it comes time to face the Nerven Race, the Ascended and the Sin of Pride... the earlier storytelling is thrown out the window. Each conclusion is a single chapter that equates to the mc wants X to happen and it does... cause the super strong enemies he faces early on are all wet tissue paper at the end. And not cause Reylin grew stronger... he just instantly has what he needs cause the story needed to end. Still a rushed ending doesn't spoil the read, so give it a go and when Reylin rescues his second earth concubine take that as the conclusion rather than the tripe that follows.
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Honestly, I liked it. Concept was nice, and not common. The MC is, to put it in a bad way, weird, to put it in a good way, he's just eccentric. For me, his personality is a breath of fresh air. Story is pretty nice, also it has a good twist for the vr genre. I can let that weak/inconsistent gaming system slide. I'd say this is pretty unique. My only qualm is about the grammar mistakes. Like using the wrong words but similar words, or confusing sentence construction sometimes. But they are all readable, if anything, it must be because of writing fatigue or because there is no editor.
The author came up with a great premise and the inital 50 or so chapters do a great job with it. However, after that the story starts to feel less like we’re following a pyromaniac and more like we’re following some generic fire mage who has a special class. He no longer has those moments that defined his character and instead theyre replaced with edgy statements or moves. The plot gets confusing and riddled with events that have little purpose.