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Sixth here, the author ^^ I wrote two stories after ending my ongoing ones, and this one is by far the most fun to write for me. I will do my best to give daily updates, around 1-3 chapters. The usual update rate is 2 chaps daily, but I often throw another one ^^ Come and hang out on my discord too ^^ (Link in synopsis)
I loved the story, characters, plot. The beginning was great, middle was fantastic. The climax... was where it dropped off. The pacing just went nuts and it really hurt the great things you had set up. So by the ending, the resolution just did not feel rewarding. for one, you developed Aria so well and she became one if the best characters, yet she gets zero screen time in the ending. Not to mention Yvonne. She was turning into a great antagonist but just gets thrown in the background then randomly written off. it's a shame because this story had so much potential and I still loved it. But it just gets extremely rushed to the ending. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and thanks for writing this story.
Wonderful, great, perfect, incredible? To continue like this, without a doubt, one of my favorite novels. I like Reylin's personality. How he has transmitted his emotions to the game, bringing out another facet of him; although I wish that, in real life, he would also do more than just depend on his parents. I suppose he is still young and maturing or will he live like this forever? Harem: Aria as the leader of the harem, please. Layla, Maya, Steel Melody, Yuki and Emilia and more? Titiana, for example. I like them all.
Venia por algo de +18 ya que no encontraba nada interesante solo puedo decir que tiene potencial ****************************************************************************************************************************************encontraba nada interesante solo puedo decir que tiene potencial *****************************************************************************************************************************************
As an author myself I just wanna say this book is amazing, it keeps you hooked from beginning to end with the uniqueness of a guy who simply loves fire! Not to mention the way his character grows more mature and betters himself as he experiences life. The ending was kind of rushed I saw WAYY more potential for what could’ve been. But when you’v been writing a book this long its only natural the ending gets slightly rushed. And I love how the marked that the story would continue on with his children and Milkyona had even reincarnated to look over the new crimson dragon. 🔥 Keep it up man!
