Alex_Destro
It' a great novel where MC just want to spend idle life. It's a fun read and what I liked the most is that although MC is lazy he is not extreme lazy that he would ignore others when they need him and act reasonably unlike a similar genre novel THE LAZY SWORD MASTER ( I hate that MC) gets annoyed with every little thing and do not want to help others. Keep up the good work.
Decent novel until it dropped the part where he's supposed to be trying to live a peaceful life. He lays low and keeps his powers a secret in the beginning, but then he just stops doing that because I guess he doesn't feel like having a peaceful life anymore? Like not much seems to change except a lot of cliche things start happening and then more and more people know about his abilities. Many could have been avoided, but he chose not to. Dropped because of this
The story is good and all that goes wrong is the character of Jayna, the 4th princess. What I mean is that that little princess is annoying, it just makes me want to hit her if she really existed, not to be precise about her I would like to kill her with my bare hands. The worst of all is that Angus does not even refuse to take care of that girl, it is one of the things that I detest the most about a character, the one that they cannot refuse. I know my review is pretty bad but I really would have liked the author to eliminate that character. Jayna is annoying, she goes where she is not called, she gets angry at the simple fact that they ignore her and starts to annoy Angus when she is very clear that she is annoying and causing a lot of problems. She is just an attention seeker, and I'm sure that if I continue reading the author will make Angus and Jayna end together, that's annoying. I have seen many of these types of characters where the annoying girl starts to cause trouble for the protagonist and in the end, she realizes that she was doing it because maybe she was in love with the mc. Annoying, I really hate these types of characters. I'm sorry if I'm too honest but really this is the typical type of character that causes trouble for the mc and even sometimes almost causes the MC's death. I'm sorry for saying this but I couldn't stay silent.
So... this will be my second review... I had to make one because grammar and everything overall improved during these past few chapters. I just finished reading the latest chapter and I can't believe this is the same author with 1-3 grammar mistakes per every other paragraph! Currently, I'm not great enough to see some big grammar mistakes from the chapters. It's also very commendable that our mc grows not only through power but also personality wise and emotionally. The world is now bigger and more dangerous than I initially thought! The characters are great, not stiff but not overshadowing the mc. Updating wise, ooh lala, still stable. Overall, I will rate everything 5 stars :> I hope more people will take interest in this and continue on reading despite the awful writing from the early chapters because I assure you that it's all worth it and that it gets better. Lave ya author, decided to give this at least 1 power stone every day :)
Overall, this is a very enjoyable story. uploading rate is good, charcter development is steady, and the story has a reasonable pace. There are some downsides to the story but nothing glaring. Personal opinion to the author: I think this story would be better without the system. Its effects are pretty minimal and is mostly used just for the main character to have a numerical gauge for his own strength.
I do really like the premise of the story, the characters are alright and I am a sucker for reincarnation stories. However good I think the story is there is one problem. The grammar is MTL quality. I don't really find this a turnoff as I enjoy the story but others might not want to auto correct everything themselves.
I look forward to the new chapter release every day. Its a well written story with a great world and thought out characters. The story development is fantastic and the only thing i have to complain about is the chapters feel shorter then they really are which just means they are that good. Keep it up author.
Amazing character development, good art, and world building, although I don't see any conspiracy or agenda yet but the plot is great for me. Yeah the story is pretty good I highly recommend this for those tired of reading OP MC who can openly beat everybody from the get go and doesn't know how to lay low.