Reviews of I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
Alex_Destro
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
The characters are ok, the story development is really good. The interactions between the characters keep you entertained and guessing what is going to be next, the ML is evolving at a good pace and the interactions with the other characters is fun and interesting. Plus, I keep waiting for the ML's older brother found out about all his knowledge and power, so I can laugh when he finds out so I can laugh at his reaction.
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Writing Quality - Problems in grammar and phrasing. Stability of Updates - 7 per week Story Development - It's enjoyable. Character Design - The characters are all pretty unique and have discerning personalities. World Background - Fantasy world reincarnating, so if that's something you like to read then yeah.
This was/is a good story. It's from the mold of the "former-expert reincarnates" genre. The MC is largely likeable. his interactions with the world and characters are fun for the most part. The characters feel more or less fleshed out and interesting enough to make me care...I think I just got spoiled by those stories where the MC says he's nor going to get wrapped up in stuff and actually successfully avoids it, or even if he doesn't succeed you don't get the feeling that he's not at all serious about this avoiding trouble thing. In this case, its slowly been made abundantly clear that as much as this MC claims to not want to get wrapped up in stuff you can totally wrap him up in stuff if you try at all hard...the mc actually loves combat and fighting and all that typical mc jazz, and it's more that thebway he died has made him gunshy about veing too open about this...and the story makes it necessary for the MC to get wrapped up in stuff because no one besides him is competent enough. I pulled out around the time he started mulling teaching his fighting arts to the princess who by now is almost certainly the female lead, going by the way the wind is blowing. It was like, "dude, are you seriously telling me that no one else in the entire kingdom can do this?!" I don't know...I enjoyed the story for what it is....but I kind thought it'd be different. Let's just say this was a good steak, but I'd kind of been in the mood for hamburger.
i cant bear to continue reading this. Mc is stupid. he is very contradictory. he wants a peaceful life then he shows all his ability. he professes his love all of a sudden because he suddenly likes the princess. he wants to hide to his stats and chooses not to increase his strength. All of a sudden everyone around Mc becomes strong but the strength of mc is stagnant. so much inconsistency. its harder to read. to be a great expert and weak at the same time and most of all his system? i thought it was an idle game system where he accumulates soul points on his own without doing anything but all of a sudden he needs to fight opponent to gain soul points. stupid novel.
TLDR: Writing Quality - 2 stars because it's in English, just barely. Everything Else - 3 stars because I can't focus on these aspects due to the above I've not read much of this book but that isn't because I dislike the premise or any other issue with the idea behind the book. The reason I can't read this is because the grammar is just awful, the mistakes are frequent and VERY noticeable. Just reading the synopsis should let you know what kind of grammar your in for with this "most strongest" of books. I'll come back and give this book another chance once the basic grammar issues have been fixed but until then I will avoid this like the plague.
I am sorry but I am dropping this novel. I know that we all want a peaceful life but this story is quite frustrating and annoying. The MC practically gives up on anything that comes his way, whether it's a battle or challenge or something like and his system basically makes him stronger while he does nothing. Other than that, there are many grammatical errors in this story and sometimes, I can't even read a chapter before finding mistakes. I am sorry but I will have to drop it as I cannot read it any further
Raw... The best I can say about this novel is this. The story development is not bad but the main idea from reading this novel is already lost in around 100 chapters. The MC hidden strength is no longer hidden and he no longer pursues a peaceful life, he just becomes a battle freak who can not control his emotions even when he is a control freak. The FL... what I can say? an old man was attracted to 12 years old girl suddenly when he was ignoring her for 4 years, the FL herself is not a special character and the interaction between them is forced before they start dating and became overly close when they just start dating. other significant characters, the roomates of his has barely any exposure until they become 14 years old and his mother and aunt who should be strong don't have enough exposure while his father and the king is always been on the screen, his teacher who should be an important character don't appear after he joined the school and his brothers have no big role in his life, we don't even know why his big brother disdain him. again the "hidden" part of the story, when he should just enjoy his life, is a lie, almost all the strong characters that were introduced in the story already know about his hidden strength and this make the essence of the story lost, you will also find few plot lines that help in building the world but it always feels fragile and need more support and thinking. There are many good things about this novel because the author is talented but the MC is just giving me a very bad impression that makes me unable to think about the good things. Finally, when I said this novel is raw I meant it literally, the novel feels like a great idea that needs many improvements, editing and polishing. a remake for it will be a hundred times better than what we have now.
The Novel has good potential but it needs a editor badly. 90% Of the sentences need to be reworked. It feels like im reading a bad translation . It also needs to improve the explanation of his system. It keeps getting a new power like an after thought. It would be nice to also have a decription as to how his system works better. Since it seems me and a few others need more details. Such as how does his system help with his studies? How does it help with his spells? Stuff like that. Good potential but needs to be reworked and touched up a bit more.
Grammer isn't just bad. It's literally a war crime. I would suggest the author that they try to write everything in same tense. There's a lot of tools that fix these mistakes too. As it is rn, it's like a really bad mtl or maybe worse. Word, Google docs, even gmail mail composition, there's lot of free options for improvement. If you can't even put at least this little effort then you don't even deserve a review about character, world, story development.
seems like a great book, but there are so many issues in the writing. I'm far from a writer, but a basic app like grammarly would do wonders. I would certainly love it if it didnt sound poorly translated, and I genuinely reccomend having some go through and edit/fix such mistakes if you struggle to.
The synopsis of the story looked great; I liked the title; All in all it seemed like a book I would really enjoy. Then I tried reading the first chapter and the grammer kciked me so hard in the face my teeth were all knocked out. I will be more than happy to change my review if the Grammer improves to a basic level of English.