Little Brother Langya
while the premise of the story is interesting, the overall story seems to be almost a wish fulfilment. the author did almost no research on any country mentioned. they just took their experience in china, put a USA lens on it and calling it a day. same for the Russian spies with American names was also an odd choice since the seemed to be the only protagonist that has appeared. I would give more details but I don't want to spoil it. read the free chapters and judge for yourself but I wouldn't recommend this.
Story HAD a potential. Where its gone, no one knows. From the way its written, to the plot holes(Sorry, but i can only see holes and no plot anymore), to the main character is nonsensical at best..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
One of the worst books I have ever read. The entire story is unrealistic. Its like a 13 year old from china is trying to write about the US government. (Which is essentially what it is). So many things happen that would NEVER happen and make no sense. There is so much more I could right, but I would just get madder, especially considering I LIVE in the US, so Im just going to shut up.
There might be an interesting story in there but it is soo badly written that I can't immerse myself at all. It needs a complete rewrite and the author needs, I repeat, NEEDS to do a better job researching the country they are setting the story in. Using incorrect references breaks immersion and ruins the story. The author needs to be more consistent with the world view. There are many more flaws but I'm unwilling to write an essay just to point them all out. I don't know if this is a westernization of a Chinese book as some suggest but if it is I strongly recommend having a westerner do the rewrite or at the very least have a westerner proof read the work.
this is one of the most trashiest novels i have ever read so far. the only good thing about this novel is the mc's cheat, a system that can give him points for reading and listening to any kind of knowledge, and he is able to purchase technology, power ups in xianxia style, and increase his comprehantion to some degree. this rest of the novel is utterly trash. 1. the story happens in US, but all departments and people's values and actions are just like in china. 2. every person around mc is reacting as if some god is in front of them instead of a normal mc with a cheat, aplauding and supporting the mc's every action like he was a boxer in a heavy wight ring (wresling) 3. every other character then mc is only there to rise his ego or something there are more things to be annoyied about, but im just too lazy to add them here without giving spoilers. as of ch 130, there is no love interest at least.
Another one of the swapped countries or "Americanized" webnovel. LOL Qidian must be feeling the heat with their anti-West books.. hence, they try to flip the table by changing the country and names of the MC. BUT, no matter how much you try QIDIAN, a pig is a pig. Maybe you can try to pray to your god mao sebum. He might create a miracle.. oh wait! The only miracle he does is kills his own people! Millions of them!