I died and woke up in an otome game (BL)

Antonio had a difficult life. and then he died. And then, then the goddess of love and life, Aphrite gave him a new one. This is his story. So volume one is the previous version and volume two is the rewrite. *rewrite is susceptible to differing plot.

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Chapter 62 : Is it greedy to want more comments? Part 2

The fridge wasn't refilled. And there's no alcohol. Maybe it's a sign, from like, the goddess of...food and alcohol. Maybe, I spent too much time in this particular room and this is the infinite hallway's way of telling me to move on and explore.

I mean, I kinda want to find the doorway to Hogwarts.

See, I have a theory. My theory is that these doors, in this infinite corridor, (Yes, I watched Castlevania. Yes, I cried, future baby pope. You did too, so, shove off!) are breaches of a sort, into other realities, and spaces in time. You'd be surprised to learn, that in this archaic and magically ran land, we have Netflix. it's not called that, for copyright reasons, but we have it, and Castlevania, because *cough* [RETRACTED] *cough* doesn't care about the probability of the word, "Castlevania" being copyrighted.

Stop breaking the fourth wall, me.


I'm breaking the fourth wall too much. Sigh.

Anyways, just like this infinite hallway wants, I emerged from the door that resembled the door in the clearing from season six of Once Upon A Time (Also, probably copyrighted, but [REDACTED] doesn't care) and started my journey towards freedom. And Hogwarts.

I've always wanted to explore Hogwarts.

Did I ignore the fact the Benedictis is stuck in the wall, groaning, whilst Valerian, whose name I forgot momentarily but remembered out of necessity, was being lectured by whatshisface? Yes.

I've honestly forgotten her male companion's name, it's been so long since he's been in a chapter, baby pope. Or maybe [REDACTED] just has a horrible memory, I mean she wrong the previous...intry and put Valerian into that chapter and couldn't remember her name. Which lead to Benedictis being in the dog house. Sigh.

[REDACTED] and Aphrite are two serious peas in a pod with how much they ruin my life.

Ah, fourth walling again. Oops.

...Why do we call it the fourth wall? Why not the third? Who decided that the narrator of a book speaking to the readers, was fourth walling? Hmm..I should research this.

Goddess, I miss Google. Google solved everything.


Ooh! Rainbow door! Hogwarts, here I come!

....It wasn't Hogwarts but at least I found a DRAGON!!!

Well, I still have no idea where this story is going, but hey, at least it's entertaining?...I hope? IDK, everytime I read someone else's story (a good story, mind you,) on Webnovel, I get all fed up with my word and accuse it like, "Why aren't you this good? how can I make you better? Why can't we get that many views?" But then I realize that I have no plan, no drive, and very small chaps. I have good writing, I suspect. At least, I like the way I write, but I'm also inconsistent with updates, and I sometimes don't like my characters. And I have decided, sadly, that ben is a VILLIAN who will break my poor Antonio's heart! GAH, I feel like crying, and I also want more DRAKE, because I didn't give any of us time to fall in love with him, (WE DON'T EVEN KNOW HIS BIRTHDAY! or how they became friends, only like two insights. ugh.) and even as the author who created him I feel GIPPED! maybe one of these days I'll write an extra with drake and Antonio play drunk 20 questions (because of course drake is a bad influence! He's DRAKE!) and how they became friends. IDK.

basically, I just want more comments. I want to feel like this story is being read. Because even though, I see the number of readers rise slowly every day It simply feels like bots to me. ugh. whatever. I love my readers. But I want comments.

....and I turn 18 in two weeks. ugh. at least, I'm going to universal studios (which inspired this chap,)

Your gift is the motivation for my creation. Give me more motivation!

Creation is hard, cheer me up!

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