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Haes_Deas
Haes_DeasLv1Haes_Deas

I was abit skeptical at first, but the author does know how to bring the character's...character to life. I note he is also the same author for Alexander the Great Mage. No wonder!

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mrant12
mrant12Authormrant12

Hi guys, shameless author review here. Hope you guys enjoy the start, more coming up in a few days. Please also read my other book 'Alexander the Great Mage.' It has got more chapters and is pretty fun too!

Grayback
GraybackLv14Grayback

Congrats for securing a place in WPC 211- 212. Hope to see more chapters in the future, getting served like hot cross buns fresh out of the oven! ;)

Abhinav_Reddy_6592
Abhinav_Reddy_6592Lv1Abhinav_Reddy_6592

bruh !!!!!!!!! mc kills mech pilots about his powers not knowing others and then suddenly he (from thin air) trusts a small girl tells about his powers without even thinking ...

Saint_Grey
Saint_GreyLv1Saint_Grey

It's a very nice story, well written, it's very clear that the author has a lot of experience in writing. Though it's just a few chapters released, I can already see the infinite potential of the novel. Great work!

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv5Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU

I would say it's a good story except for the fact that the story seems to be written with children with mind... Some people may enjoy these type of work... where mc is dumb asf and a brainless fool... yes need growth time and what not but bro first think of the setup he has then say he needs growth ... if it was a goody two shoes then i would say this setup is justified... but with his experience and livelihood his behavior literally says it's bs... no offense to the author... it's good but it's just not for me... keep up the good work... I enjoyed the unique concept... but you character creation ruined it for me... anyway do your best... good luck...😁😎

larrythecableguy
larrythecableguyLv15larrythecableguy

Very interesting writing, almost as if the book is a recollection or his past and he is passing on his story to a younger generation. Unique concept that I hope can be explored in much more detail. Looking forward to what is to come. Thanks for the chapters.

theforce1579
theforce1579Lv3theforce1579

The writing quality is fantastic and it is apparent that the author has some prior experience in writing novels, so on that front, it is excellent. The characters are well written the story is intriguing. The inner monologue of the mc is descriptive but also concise at the same time. The exposition is also really good. Overall a very enjoyable read. Best od luck to the author

Pixiepiu
PixiepiuLv12Pixiepiu

Though there are only two chapters I must say it's very interesting to read. well written. I don't usually read sci-fi novels but I like this one. The only thing I could not find is the quotation. So Great work author, keep it up.

Sunny_Shad0w
Sunny_Shad0wLv12Sunny_Shad0w

Though there is only two chapters, I'm sure you can do better. What's really confusing me though is the absence of quotations. Usually, in dialogue, quotations were used to separate dialogue from the narrative. If you can do that, I'm sure this would be a great story. That is the only flaw I have as of now. You can do it!

Sega_Sonicfans
Sega_SonicfansLv1Sega_Sonicfans

One of the high-quality Sci-fi I have seen in this platform. The grammar is amazingly exceptional for its high output. I must compliment the author for this as we all know that most writers here have terrible grammars. It is normal considering their high output of chapters. Generally WN writers typically updated once a day or twice a day. Most writers barely could write 600 words a week. It's grammar is actually better than Mech Touch, and its plot are much faster than Mech Touch too. Though if you'd like to start in Sci-fi genre I recommend reading The Legendary Mechanic, Mechanical Emperor, The Great Machine Sage, and the Mech Lord

Brian_Hanes_117
Brian_Hanes_117Lv1Brian_Hanes_117

The story is solid, the world-building is respectable, and it is an easy read. One thing that I would change is adding more visual description. Visual description entails what the characters look like and the environment does. If I'm reading a story about mechs and with a lot of cool technology then I want to be able to visualize the scene. I wish you the best on your future endeavors author. Keep in mind we all have different values, Feel free to check out my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey."

DeadBite
DeadBiteLv14DeadBite

Absolute Gem of a book well worth the wait for more chapters to release also great plot but I won’t spoil anything for y’all hope the book stay coin less so everyone can injoy the book. So everyone can Appreciate the authors hard work that he has put into his book. Keep them chapter rolling author the anticipation is killing me

ciptadewirahmafita
ciptadewirahmafitaLv3ciptadewirahmafita

suka banget sama alur ceritanya ,nama tokoh Yang keren .dan suasana di setiap chapternya juga keren .sukses terus ya buat karyanya dan bab selanjutnya .

THE_WORDSMITH
THE_WORDSMITHLv2THE_WORDSMITH

This will get you hooked and keep you hooked. So I recommend you the book with all my heart because it has been a long time since a book made me go till 20 chapters in a go. This book will bring you, comedy, action, and young love.

Perverted_Fella
Perverted_FellaLv13Perverted_Fella

Hehe, To be sincere I am really amazed with the character design. He is a smart little guy and not some naive Mc in other novels. This novel as a lot of potential and I can't wait to witness the popularity. 🤗🤗🤗

LordofKaizen
LordofKaizenLv10LordofKaizen

Excellent writing might I begin with. The story is somewhat refreshing from the mecha novels I have grown use to. The protagonist is portrayed to be a young but cynical lad who has been raised knowing the harsh cruel realities of the real world. With such a premise you are often left wondering 'what will happen next' once you are done with the chapter. The English in this novel also far exceeds those common to web novel, with every sentence being easily understandable. Overall the novel was quite the interesting read, a hidden gem if you will. I highly recommend it!

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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IkuSaari
IkuSaariLv13IkuSaari

Solid. Really solid, I mean like steel in its solid form solid. The pacing was the first thing I noticed. It's so fine, you'll miss your bus if you try to read in a "hurry" since the author drops the characterization and the world background in all the right places. I don't remember reading about mecha before and this set the bar so high that I won't remember any mecha books after this one, either. The sudden surge towards greater power is well executed and the plot feels real. I have nothing to complain about. Again, pacing, characterization, plot, world background, all on point. I wanted to find stuff to complain about. I didn't. This deserved the WPC win.

NayI
NayILv1NayI

Awalnya bingung sama karakter yg dibuat tp makin dibaca wow.. Kayak dikasih kejutan gitu It's a good story. I love it Harus banget masuk collection sih ini Suka banget sama ceritanya 😊