Reviews of I Dare Not Hope
I Dare Not Hope
bishop1275
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This book is so romantically mysterious! The characters are intriguing and give you all the butterflies!! Only 31 chapters at the time of this review but i cant wait for more!
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First of all, I love that you have so many chapters up already! I can read binge it! As for the story: I really like the romantic vibes without it being too cliché. The romance felt very realistic and it makes the struggles the FL goes through, understandable to readers. Here is my tip: Try to proofread. Sometimes I noticed some mistakes with the past tense and sometimes with the spelling. If you proofread, you can easily detect it. Overall, a very good story, loved how everything fits together. I added it to my library! Keep up the good work!
I think that your story is very intriguing. The first chapter kept me wanting to read it, and I found myself deep into the world. It also made me very anxious as well. You did an amazing job at describing the fire, and the scenery overall. Keep it up! I look forward to more chapters. I didn't check for grammar, but I do always recommend checking it. This is for all writers that I have reviewed so far. Good job, and happy writing. :)
I love the story line. It is very intriguing and obviously fascinating. You have a good flow to the story and the character development is quite well done. I haven't read the whole thing, but as I will go along, I'll add my feedback on the comments. Overall, the story is great! One small suggestion for the chapters I've read so far is that you should expand more on the protagonist's emotions. I just think it helps the readers develop a better connection with the protagonist.
This story has an interesting and cohesive plot, which definitely makes it worth checking out. Though there are occasional grammatical mistakes, they don't detract much from the story. The characters all have their own unique personalities and are interesting to follow. However, I must say I'm not too fond of who I think is the male lead. Keep up the good work author!!
As I started reading the first chapter I thought this would be a normal romantic story but My God! The way the story suddenly switched gears was simply amazing. I was in no way expecting a time skip but I guess when the most unexpected thing happens that's what makes the story more intriguing, The description has also been done really. Lastly, I really want to say that the ending of chapter 2 is sizzling. Looking forward to read more.
