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Reviews of I Created a World of Magic!

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I Created a World of Magic!

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Theodorus_Mafig
Theodorus_MafigLv12Theodorus_Mafig

The ideas and plots in this novel is good, however, almost all of them is poorly executed. Scenes takes too many chapters and we don't get to see the characters personality. The side char acters are too 2nd Dimensional and flat. For a special soldier, a lieutenant, and a massive alliance managing the world, they don't seem to fulfill their roles. The setting tries to be more western but it comes out as an eastern setting. I hope to see this novel improve.

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Xenor
XenorLv2Xenor

good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good,

Mugiwara12
Mugiwara12Lv15Mugiwara12

Fresh new idea, i love it. i like the fact that the mc had to make people to believe in magic. The wrIting is a bit off but you’ll hardly notice.

Estreiger
EstreigerLv5Estreiger

La novela original es realmente buena, el RAW esta esta modificada tanto la historia como los nombres esta todo cambiado para que los gringos lo lean, una completa basura

Movezbatch
MovezbatchLv4Movezbatch

mc is dumb. mc is dumb. mc is dumb. mc is dumb. mc is dumb. mc is dumb.mc is dumb.mc is dumb.mc is dumb.mc is dumb.mc is dumb.mc is dumb.mc is dumb.mc is dumb.mc is dumb.

chichi32310
chichi32310Lv13chichi32310

it's a real good story and I plan to follow it to the end of it gets picked but the one thing I wanna know is why does the MALE mc have a GIRLS name

DoBeReading
DoBeReadingLv4DoBeReading

Poggers????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Kevin_Alfaro_8477
Kevin_Alfaro_8477Lv4Kevin_Alfaro_8477

I love it and I hope he continues and stops his break

ironic
ironicLv3ironic

who's taking a break e?? qidian translator really is a trash. they're not committed . when is this gonna translated i wonder. lol trash translators.

Lordmarvel1
Lordmarvel1Lv1Lordmarvel1

A little bit overboard. The mc I a man but he his named charlot Bro days cliché Anyways it's still some how nice

diogohc5
diogohc5Lv1diogohc5

Reveal spoiler

Kikasharn
KikasharnLv15Kikasharn

So far the story is enjoyable. Tiny mistakes are no problem, and its still easy to read. I look forward to the continuation from the author.

DrunkenScholarHill
DrunkenScholarHillLv5DrunkenScholarHill

Building The Ultimate Fantasy was much much better than this novel while having the same sort of setup and it got dropped so don’t even bother with this one.

swordauthor
swordauthorLv1swordauthor

good good good 👌 good good ☺️🆗🆗🆗🆗🆗🆗🆗🆗🆗☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🆗🆗🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥❤️🔥❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯💯💯💯

josuemandrak
josuemandrakLv2josuemandrak

Meh ........................................................................................ Fill

IAmALazyIdiot
IAmALazyIdiotLv1IAmALazyIdiot

Good prospects and storyline This will definitely be good And -------------------- Raw name plssss!!! Raw name plssss!!!Raw name plssss!!! Thank you...... ........

Kurogane_Ikki_
Kurogane_Ikki_Lv4Kurogane_Ikki_

Reveal spoiler

Deavila
DeavilaLv3Deavila

an interesting concept, however the construction of the world and the character of the military and various institutions is a bit incongruous

Madara_Uchiha
Madara_UchihaLv5Madara_Uchiha

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dominion629
dominion629Lv15dominion629

It is a good story, the only problem is the fact that the MC name is always changing.