The story had potential, but it just took a nosedive so fast. Translation messes up pronouns, then they even stopped translating the MC’s name, so he was called both Charlot (a feminine name) and Xiao Xia. Story progresses way too fast, and even though its based in the US, none of the people act like americans at all. Just bleh in general.
say no to westernized and MTL translations on this site. this is bad trend that needs to be stopped in the roots. ffs in this one they cant keep name of MC consistent and they probably changed setting from China to US... and story has logical loopholes when you forcibly change countries.. keep translations pure
Clearly was just put through google translate. Mc is called Charlot, it's a male mc. Uses the US as the setting, but fails to depict anything that supports it. Name of starting city is ridiculous and the author was too lazy to look up a random US city name. Uses the US Secret Service as a plot device, without knowing how they work. They are not going to turn up at your place unless the president is visiting even if you are Jesus and they are in town. They are also not the top elites of the military forces of the US. Please don't use my country as part of your story if you are not going to put the effort to learn about it.
Is there a raw for this novel if there is and if anybody finds the raw please send me link to the raw raw raw raw raw raw. S and the only other world cup of the devil in the world is the point of the devil in the raws for this novel is a misunderstanding novel where the mc has a good relationship with a woman whose life is the mtl.
Are people believing in magic in the world? Stage magician:.... Cultist leader:..... “Miracles”:..... People buying crystal balls:.... Fortune tellers:.... Children:.... People reading zodiac signs:.... So i would say that there are countless people believing in magic everyday, major plot hole detected.
I just want say that the story development is to fast. Just in the chapter 1&2 people and the government already believe that magic is real and there is no a single doubt at all. I mean to say that I want to feel a sense a development where the MC struggle or whatever it is to achieve his goal? Btw, good job author for the novel
The story could have been alright if the translation didn't have pronoun and naming errors. The story has also been westernized so that it takes place in the US instead of china, but changing the organizations to match ones in the US just doesn't fit. There is even a, western area president. Could have been readable but what happened in translation just makes it insulting to the reader. Don't spend money on inferior goods.