Cons: The english is mostly ok,p but there are a lot of gramatical errors and words that make no sence in that sentenc. for example "tatto" when it should be "arrow" "sword" instead of "spear" and many more. the world and characters are ok. story is going slow, and maybe the powerlvls are not so stranger forward, which anoys me. som of the MC's way of thinking is annoying and i believe also wrong for his situation some times.
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just place brackets when it comes to anything with the system and pls mass release!! ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
sorry is good has a unique sense to it so as long as the updates are continues I give this story a five star and now am just writing because i don't have enough words nevermind
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The only thought that across my mind after reading 50 chapters is that absolute disappointment.
Good read. Mc is actually smart and hard working so he doesn't take for granted the powers that he got.
chapter 121. altho the story is ok, the title/tags are misleading. it should be "i can make everything level up.. but I won't". with that title, i think you can pretty much expect what you'll read.
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This book is awesome I’m hooked up from chapter 1 till latest chapter. The characters design and power up are excellent. The plot is written well I recommend this book to everyone believe me it’s very good
20 chapters and the more and more I'm enjoying this book. excellent characters and a story that seems realistic. I love the use of the system that doesn't make mc OP too quickly
Its a great start to a novel, the pacing is good and the world is interesting. It could use an editor though, there are some sentences that dont totally make sence and come off a little weird. But as of chapter 44 its been a fantastic read.
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So far it seems really good i havent read a kingdom building novel on this app yet but this seems pretty good a lot of potential can’t wait for more chapters
Great book ending was a little rushed but still great