Mysterious_Pen
I hate writing a review, but this novel is just compelling me to do so. Anyway, this is the very lighthearted eastern fantasy novel I have ever read and very refreshing after reading a lot of eastern fantasy, in which every chapter is about fighting, fighting, and fighting. I love how the story progressed. Instead of narrating about fighting enemies, rivals, young master, etc., the author chose to make the story more interesting, and he seems trying hard to avoid any cliche events that often happened in most eastern fantasy novels. Anyway, this is an outstanding novel, at least for me.
Hello, Let me just start out with saying I very much enjoy this book. I will admit the slow updates get to me but anything worth while always takes time in my opinion. So more then willing and able to wait. Author please continue this book as it brings me much joy and a look forward to seeing it further along. I know in chapter 170 you left some negative remarks but don't put yourself down. You have a great idea going and I look forward to seeing it grow. I did leave a comment for some ideas if you would like to check back on it. (To lazy to rewrite the whole thing). I can't wait ( really I can take your time lol) for the next chapter. ( ◜‿◝ )♡
I find the concept of the novel quite innovative with the mc having an op system, but only regarding his current cultivation level and said system will grow with the mc. The problem with this novel is that is simply boring with almost zero interesting events surrounding the mc and stupidity of the mc, which can be seen especially in the auction arc.
The pace is a bit too slow, the mc’s intelligent is about average leaning to stupidity, despite having an op system he didn’t advance in cultivation whatsoever and simply a bit too idle, if you can extract anything and store its pure energy form there is kinda no point in learning alchemy and blacksmithing since he can just put effect on random pill and it became an alchemy pills and he can just find relic or something and extract high grade weapons from it. Wasted potential.
This novel is horrendously one dimensional, it's lackluster to the point where the only reason you could even read it was just to pass time, none of the chapters I've read impress me or make me want to read more, I dropped it when I just couldn't force myself to continue reading it, I blame the author because the concept of the novel itself is amazing its just that it had an awful delivery.
from reading the synopsis it almost same like sign in buddha's palm. did ya get the idea from that novel? not that i mind if you manipulate the idea from the novel. take example warlock of the magus world, it a amazing novel base on idea of wizard world by get lost. I just hope that you can do what author like The Plagiarist do.