Greetings Author!
I had initially not thought about writing a review, but then I saw that no one has done a review yet, which made me wan't to do the first one.
Writing Quality - Although there may be some grammatical mistakes from time to time, as well as spelling mistakes. I still like the way that the novel is written. I believe that you could produce a chapter a day instead of 2 and then focus on making the chapter a bit longer, otherwise, I truly am loving it so far.
Stability of Updates - When I check the release date of the different chapters than you have produced so far, I can give it a solid 5 stars. Although, I am bound to change this if you suddenly slow down the pace. But at the moment, great job! Keep it up.
Story Development - I cannot say much about this yet, but I have liked the story so far and how it has been progressing. For now, I will leave this at 4 stars and once you reach 50 chapters, I will update this once again.
Character Design - We have not really seen a lot of characters thus far, but I am sure that this is bound to change as well. And like with the Story Development, I will change this too after 50 chapters. If you have failed to come up with some characters, like allies or something of the sort, then I will have to downgrade the rating here.
World Background - I cannot say that I am 100% sure what this means. But assuming that it is how the world is built. I love it, absolutely love it. I cannot remember the last time I've seen a novel with an overpowered character that can switch between the real world and fictional world. I guess that novels with a cheat MC in the real world is just one of my weird "novel fetishes".
All in all, fantastic. I really do love it so far and I intend to give all of my power stones solely to this novel till you have gotten enough reviews to get a rating next to the novel "cover".
I do have a tip if you wish for your novel to get bigger. Firstly, add tags! Secondly, add an original cover! and third, but not least: Keep the update rate at at least 1 chapter a day.
-Tristan (If you find any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes, then I apologize)
