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Reviews of I'm a Walking Disaster With My Unwanted Virginity

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I'm a Walking Disaster With My Unwanted Virginity

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FantasyBliss30
FantasyBliss30Lv12FantasyBliss30

The writing is as clean as bottled mineral water, pure and flows easily, something that only comes with years of practice. Helios is a fun MC, easy to connect and his mother is an absolute charmer. The story starts immediately and doesn't dilly dally. We do see some internal conflict in helios, and lil bit with his sis. I am only on chapter 4, so I am sure the author portrays or will portray the greater conflict in the future. The dialogues are awesome and on the best features of this story. We already see a lil of the world, and I believe there will be more of the mutant world in future. I sure will continue to follow this story. Thank you, author.

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Preyz07
Preyz07Lv10Preyz07

although I just read 3 chapters but I think I already where the story is going! I just hope that Elsa will be part of Helio's harem too!πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜πŸ€­

Landlord_0651
Landlord_0651Lv4Landlord_0651

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tokyo_gojo
tokyo_gojoLv1tokyo_gojo

5 stars.........................................................................................................................................................

Levoniko
LevonikoLv1Levoniko

The narrator has an engaging voice. Good grammar. Intriguing world and characters. It's one of those few novels that give me faith in web novels.

Blim_BlueDust
Blim_BlueDustLv15Blim_BlueDust

This story is promoted as part of a Christmas thing. started reading and have enjoyed it so far, and I am looking for more chapters in the future. Hopefully the author keeps writing as it fast becoming a daily fix for myself.

AMonarch
AMonarchLv2AMonarch

The writing is just marvellous. I can't begin to describe how much emotion is brought out when reading it. The detailing that goes into it is beyond extraordinary. Would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for an intriguing story. That being said, well done author!

salamontyy2
salamontyy2Lv1salamontyy2

I love the story so far so good ! Both the writing quality , story development and world background are well done and stuctured . please keep going and update more , i'm hooked already !

wookie0_
wookie0_Lv2wookie0_

the character of the novel are so refined the plot is dark and that's a good thing , the story sometimes felt confusing and I had to reread few parts but overall it was good

Yash_Singh_3410
Yash_Singh_3410Lv3Yash_Singh_3410

Keep it up πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

_hestia_
_hestia_Lv2_hestia_

The characters are portrayed very well and the interactions have a natural flow which is alluring. Certain sentences do seem abrupt but, the essence of the story does attract readers.

Oracle_Myth
Oracle_MythLv1Oracle_Myth

This story is a whirlwind for sure! There isn't a boring moment and the writing flows at a steady but neck-breaking speed. That being said I love it as it fits the story well. The premise and the world are a superb!

Heart59
Heart59Lv2Heart59

THIS BOOK IS JUST AMAZING! AUTHOR, I REALLY REALLY SUPER LOVE YOUR BOOK! It’s great! No wonder why it has many reviews! Keep up the great work, author! I’m rooting for you! Ahhhhh i’m so excited!

xSariel
xSarielLv4xSariel

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwu goob jobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

jLionz
jLionzLv4jLionz

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Nagaraju_Naik
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