I haven't reviewed yet, lol. I really don't know what to expect from this story, I'm just writing what I like and the way I imagine it. I am the type of person who takes a plastic sword and starts to play imagining that I am in this anime that is why my Mc will hardly be Op right from the start. I can't take a sword and then face an imaginary enemy and imagine myself defeating him in two blows or defeating him without difficulty, it's not fun to play like that. So the story will be like I'm playing with a sword, something like that, lol. Yes, I have no idea what I'm talking about. Btw, I have had a plastic sword for over 10 years, before I started writing I played with it every day. In fact I still play ... Damn it, I sleep with her ... Seriously, I can't sleep without her. I have had it for so long that it is a little broken and is even patched by tape, I wanted to fix it but I don’t know how ... And I don’t know why I’m saying that, lol. Ps secret: This is not my main account, I have another account. I am not publishing this story in it because in that one I am writing a Novel and I paused to think about the story. I already had an idea and even wrote a similar story, but I got discouraged because I couldn't see a future where I enjoyed writing that story. Anyway, I'm writing on this account because I don't want to disappoint the people who are reading my Novel for not being writing the novel and be writing the fanfic instead. And amazingly what took 1 month to get on the novel, it took 2 days to get on this story and look, I posted chapters every day for 1 month. I don't know if I feel happy or discouraged.
This fanfiction has a LOT of potential. I've been readind fanfic for quite some time and I can tell that this could really become A-tier. Yuri is a nice touch (I'm a big fan of yuri) but please don't make the only focus romance. Many fanfic end up becoming bland and lazy because the main character is too OP and get's all the chicks like they are fucking collectibles (seriously they have the personnality of a lego brick). But this one seems like it's written by a MATURE person and not some f***ing edgelord mega dark genocidal maniac. I really have high hope regarding this fanfic. Please don't drop it !!!
This is a really good and interesting fanfic. All the chapters were very well written and I really didn't see any problems with the fanfic. If there was a point to improve, it is that the mc hasn't started training kenjutsu even though he knows that his cheat (he hasn't woken up yet) is a sword. But it is worth mentioning that the MC didn't have much time to train yet and focused on strengthening the bases, so it makes sense not to have used a sword yet. To be honest, it is a pity such a good fanfic to reach so few readers and may have been severely hampered by the new fan ranking system that separates male mc from famele mc. Perhaps it is good if the author posts this fanfic in the ranking of male mc also to see if it reaches more readers. For example, I don't care if the MC is male or female and I still forget to look at both rankings when looking for new fanfics.