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I'll stay with my daughter for a second longer

“Dad, if you don’t attack Mom now, I will disappear due to the changes in history!” Wu Shen, who originally thought he was destined to live a lonely life, woke up one day and saw a little loli who claimed to be his daughter who came from the future suddenly appearing. How did I become your father? Hey, I say you should find someone else. What? You said your mother's name is Kasumigaoka Utaha? You said your mother is Mashiro Shiina? You said your mother's name is Yukinoshita Yukino? So, to save his adorable loli daughters, Wu Shen embarked on a majestic journey of conquest.

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Why are you writing your friend Kasumigaoka-san's novel?

In Wu Shen's opinion, there are two ways to solve Kasumigaoka Utaha's novel being cut in half.

The first way is to find a way to share this work with more people. To be more precise, it is advertising. If there are professional commentators, UP owners and bloggers in this area to help promote the work, and patiently present and recommend this work in detail, and explain its advantages, perhaps it can be saved from being cut in half, and it may even be a great success.

After all, besides the cliché of love on campus, Utaha's story itself is still very good. The vivid characters, delicate emotional descriptions, and excellent writing skills are absolute bonus points.

As long as the reader is able to open the book and read the second chapter despite the recommendation, the possibility of being attracted to "Metronome of Love" and buying it is very high.

The second method, proposed by Wu Shen, is to add the 'love triangle' plot at the beginning of the novel. Simply put, he needs to add a female character to the first volume to create a sense of choice.

You know, couples fighting is always a good way to attract people.

This type of plot not only breaks the general routine background, but once readers choose a character, they will look forward to the subsequent plot development, which will bring a qualitative change in the popularity of the novel. You could say you'll kill two birds with one stone and get the best of both worlds.

[Author's note: I must make it clear that I absolutely hate this type of plot, in the end you end up really liking one character but the protagonist ends up with another in the end, the best examples of this are 'Nisekoi' and 'To love ru' . You spend the entire story loving one character but in the end the protagonist ends up with another.]

Wu Shen always liked to solve problems himself, rather than relying on unreliable external forces.

As the saying goes, even though you depend on everyone's support, in the end you will still have to trust yourself! So he prefers the second option. However, the specific choice of method must respect Utaha's ideas, after all, this is her work, not Wu Shen's.

"Why don't you introduce two heroines in the first volume?" Wu Shen asks.

"Emotional hesitation and choice often end up becoming more deeply rooted in people's hearts, which makes this type of storyline very appealing." Wu Shen said attractively, but what he thought of were the words "stomach medicine" and "dog food".

[Author's note: Until now I don't know what these two terms mean, I searched a lot for answers and in the end I didn't find anything with which I could replace them, so for those who have read Chinese novels maybe you can understand for those who have never read a Chinese novel, unfortunately we are in the same hole.]

Next, Wu Shen told Utaha all the two solutions he had thought of and then waited for her decision.

Surprisingly, Utaha didn't hesitate much: "Let's choose the second option. Among them, I originally planned to add a new character in the second volume."

"Two girls fall in love with the same boy, the emotional struggle, the choice of male protagonist. Hehehe, I can think of so many wonderful plots already." Suddenly, the air around Kasumigaoka Utaha seemed to have darkened, she quickly took out a bag from her school bag. She took out her laptop and placed it on the table, and her fingers clicked on the keyboard like a musician playing the piano.

The blank electronic document was filled with dense text at an extremely fast speed.

This was the first time Wu Shen saw Utaha coding in front of him. It was like an evil Rakshasa. Wu Shen even felt that he could see the black aura radiating around Utaha.

[Author's note: For those who have never heard about Rakshasa, here it is - Rakshasa is a race of mythological humanoid beings or evil spirits in the Buddhist and Hindu religion. The name comes from the Sanskrit "raksha", asking for protection, as they were such horrifying beings that they induced anyone who came across them to ask for protection. Rakshasa were abominable, cannibalistic and wicked-minded beings. I just looked it up on Wikipedia.]

It was inconvenient for Wu Shen to disturb her, for fear of interrupting her writing inspiration, so he drank coffee and observed the scene around her.

There weren't many people in the store at this time, other than him and Utaha, there were only three or four tables with people... people?

The moment he looked around, he suddenly noticed that there was a table with somewhat strange customers. Wearing sunglasses, berets and masks, they look like two sisters, or mother and daughter.

"Why cover yourself so tightly?" Wu Shen was a little speechless. Didn't they take off his mask while he was drinking coffee?

However, it is always impolite to look at others like that, so Wu Shen soon changed his gaze.

"Damn it! Why have father and that vixen been doing this to each other for so long? He promised to love mother forever!", Amane lowered her voice to the lowest level, but still couldn't stop herself from complaining.

"What are you talking about, Amane-chan... If you make a little noise, it will be bad if you are discovered." Yukinoshita Yukino's character would never do something like stalking. But she couldn't let go of Amane, so she could only follow him worriedly.

Although she normally kept people away from her, there was nothing she could do about Amane.

"I'm very angry. Mom, please confess your love as soon as possible. Your charming appearance will be absolutely irresistible to dad. That way he will definitely change his mind."

"Not yet, it's too early for that." Yukinoshita Yukino shook her head decisively.

They only saw each other once, how could the relationship develop so quickly? She didn't really hate Wu Shen, but that was all at this time.

At this moment Amane finally realized a very important problem. She only thought about women chasing men and thought it would be easier for her mother to chase her father, but she ignored the relationship itself and her mother's inherently cold personality.

It was because of a number of things that my father and mother gradually came together. Now, urging them like this amounts to undermining their efforts.

"No matter what, we must find ways to increase opportunities for parental contact. Otherwise, due to the current interference of third parties, even the series of events that promoted the relationship between the two in the past may not happen. Amane analyzed silently.

"Mom, I remember you organized a club in high school, right? How about inviting dad to participate?"

After hesitating for a moment, Yukinoshita Yukino nodded lightly, "I can try that, but don't wait too long, Amane-chan." If he just participates in the club to the extent that it doesn't matter, it will be easier for her to understand Wu Shen's personality and character.

"Yes." Amane nodded. For her, as long as there is an opportunity, that is.

The sky gradually darkened and the two Yukinoshita left in silence after making plans. At this moment, Kasumigaoka Utaha also stretched, showing off the perfect curves of her body.

"It's over?" Wu Shen looked ahead and asked.

"It's only half of the first chapter. I'm not that fast at writing."

"By the way, isn't this your friend's novel? Why are you writing it Kasumigaoka-san?"

Anyway, when Utaha went home and thinking about it carefully, he might discover that something was wrong. It seemed like the truth was directly exposed, so Wu Shen planned to provoke Utaha before she realized it.

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