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I'll stay with my daughter for a second longer

“Dad, if you don’t attack Mom now, I will disappear due to the changes in history!” Wu Shen, who originally thought he was destined to live a lonely life, woke up one day and saw a little loli who claimed to be his daughter who came from the future suddenly appearing. How did I become your father? Hey, I say you should find someone else. What? You said your mother's name is Kasumigaoka Utaha? You said your mother is Mashiro Shiina? You said your mother's name is Yukinoshita Yukino? So, to save his adorable loli daughters, Wu Shen embarked on a majestic journey of conquest.

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Have you ever thought about adding a love triangle to your novel?

Time passed and, in the blink of an eye, it was time for classes to end the afternoon of the next day.

While carefully checking whether there were any students from the same school passing by, he carefully avoided the flow of people and stayed on the path.

After more than ten minutes of this, Wu Shen finally found Kasumigaoka Utaha at the door of the bookstore in the lonely alley.

It's so difficult to meet in person, it's like meeting a member of an underground party. Wu Shen secretly complained in his heart.

"What's wrong? You look so depressed. Normally, you should be happy to meet a popular girl at school, right?" Utaha held her chin with one hand, placed the other on her right elbow and made a slightly mischievous smile.

"I just think it's too much effort for us to meet like this."

"Want to announce our relationship to everyone and stop hiding it? Wu Shen-kun is surprisingly brave." Utaha spoke mischievously.

"I didn't want to announce this to anyone..., but doesn't that mean you need to be so reserved and just talk openly in class, or is Kasumigaoka-san afraid of causing some serious scandals at school?" Wu Shen responded equally maliciously.

"I'm not afraid of scandals. I just want to maintain integrity in the school. It's just a rare moment of purity. If the news really gets out, not only me but also you, Wu Shen-kun, will suffer, right?" Utaha thought for a while and responded.

"I see, I probably understand what you mean." Wu Shen nodded.

When Utaha was a freshman in high school, she was harassed by various confessions for more than half a year. If any bad news spreads now, there will definitely be another uproar. I don't know how long it will take to calm down.

As for whether you will suffer a disaster, it is even simpler. Thinking about this, he was seen saying a few words to Yukino and Utaha yesterday morning, and Hideki, Tomoya and others reacted like that.

If this scope spreads throughout the school, there will definitely be all kinds of harassment, threats, inquiries, jealousy, and all kinds of malice mixed with emotions towards Wu Shen.

Wu Shen is not afraid of these things happening, but since he can maintain this normal everyday life, why not do it?

"So where are we going? To the city library or to a coffee shop?" The two were walking on the road. As they approached the street intersection, Utaha turned to ask.

"We're going to a cafeteria further away from the school. In the library, you need to be quiet. Tasks like the one we're going to do, which require a lot of talking, will disturb other people." Wu Shen replied after thinking.

"You really think about others, so let's go to the coffee shop." Utaha smiled softly.

"I know there is a small inconspicuous coffee shop in the shopping street alley opposite, how about we go there?" Utaha continued.

"I'm not familiar with this area so I'll listen to you. "Wu Shen nodded.

So the two embarked on their journey, and no one noticed that at the corner of the alley, a little lolita and a girl wearing a beret, sunglasses, mask, scarf and long black hair were secretly following them.

"Amane-chan, can you explain why I have to do such a boring thing?" Yukinoshita Yukino's cold expression showed a hint of anger.

"This is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to investigate father and that shrew! If mother isn't willing, I can just investigate it myself." Yukinoshita Amane pouted and said angrily.

Although Amane is already very sensible. But without knowing why, once things relate to Wu Shen, he will show his childish side.

Yukinoshita Yukino turned around and wanted to leave, but after taking a few steps, she turned around and saw Amane alone. She sighed softly, shook her head and turned back. At the same time, she bent down to help her pull up her coat, took off the scarf she was wearing and put it on her.

"Now it's time to calm down, be careful not to catch a cold." Yukino said a little helplessly.

"Thank you, mom… I was wrong to shout just now…" Amane lowered her head and said in a slightly weak voice.

"Okay, if you don't keep following me, you might end up getting lost again."

"Well, no matter what, I must give my father a punishment for being a heartless man!"

Amane tugged on her scarf, and the two headed in each other's starting direction again.

"Ah, sneeze!" As soon as he entered the coffee shop, Wu Shen suddenly sneezed inexplicably, suddenly felt a chill, and his body shivered involuntarily.

"You are now my friend's romance reviewer queen, so please take good care of your health." Sitting in a corner seat near the interior, Utaha folded one leg over the other, highlighting the unique features of the black tights.

"It's nothing serious. What the hell is the M critical queen? The M word is completely redundant!"

Wu Shen and Utaha ordered coffee and dessert respectively, and then Wu Shen immediately took out the document bag. He starts reading the manuscript.

You should know that the time he can meet with Utaha after school is limited, so he should make the most of that time. Another point is that after Wu Shen read the first chapter, he always wanted to know the content next.

After reading the second chapter in his free time at night, Wu Shen is now very curious about the next situation between Sayaka and the male protagonist in "Metronome of Love".

With Utaha's help on the side, Wu Shen's reading speed improved a lot. Not realizing how much time had passed, but when the sky was already dyed red by the setting sun, Wu Shen rubbed his sore eyes and finally read the entire volume carefully.

"What do you think?" As her first reader, Utaha asked impatiently.

"The first heroine of this novel, Sayaka, I don't know why I always have a feeling of déjà vu." Wu Shen muttered, then thought of something, raised his head and looked at Utaha with both eyes.

"What, what's wrong?" Utaha's body trembled slightly, her eyes wandered, and Wu Shen felt uncomfortable looking at him.

"Please don't blame me if I guessed wrong. Is this heroine a character based on you, Kasumigaoka-san?"

"Eh!? Really, really? That friend of mine really has bad taste..." The cold and elegant disguise mask broke and Kasumigaoka Utaha's expression became panicked.

"That friend of yours is really interesting. He actually used a real person as a prototype."

Although Wu Shen had already discovered the truth, in order to avoid being threatened by the sinister Utaha, he chose to pretend to be dumbfounded.

But beyond that, the novel's problems are serious. The story is emotionally sensitive and delicate, making people unable to help but continue reading. But the background model used to convey the story is nothing innovative. Simply put, it's very routine.

An ordinary romantic comedy between a male protagonist and a female protagonist on campus. There are not just a thousand, but hundreds of thousands of light novels like this that can be considered equal. If a reader is not interested in reading the novel after reading the introduction and skimming the first chapter, then it will be meaningless no matter how exciting the subsequent content is.

No wonder Mai told Wu Shen that the novel would be cut in half by the editorial department due to poor sales in the future.

After telling Utaha his analysis, Utaha's expression gradually became serious and he nodded slightly, obviously agreeing with Wu Shen's opinion.

"So what should we do to solve this problem? This is already the central question. If we change the idea and the theme, it will be completely overturned and rewritten." Utaha nodded, looking very anxious.

"Kasumigaoka-san, don't worry. Tell me, have you ever thought about adding a love triangle into your romance?" Wu Shen asked slowly.

(End of chapter)

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