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I expected something good from this but....it seems that I was wrong........ I read the first chapter and liked it so much although there were a lot of grammar mistakes it was still understandable.........but after a few chapters it became...............how could I say it........cringy, stupid, forced, and blah blah blah~ advice from me.....don't read this fanfic or you'll get so disappointed with its development.........
I give up reading this its story is OK, but the main problem is the actual writing, like how it suddenly turns into a cultivation Chinese novel style and the names completely change from Japanese names and the anime names to completely Chinese names like how Izumi Uchihas name becomes a more cultivation novel style name.
As with other translations of Chinese fanfics, this one is filled with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. The translator apparently can't be bothered to edit the chapters or look up the correct names for characters, locations, objects, etc. The translator literally turned 'Zeref' from Fairy Tail into 'Jeff' and 'Saitama' from One Punch Man into 'Wu Nasi'...
Es uno de los fan fic más desinteresados que e leído(no de la buena manera), el trasfondo está bien pero solo se menciona en rangos generales, la trama se repite siempre solo roba chakra y has problemas sin interés, no tienes amigos ni familia y solo vives para ser más fuerte, sinceramente es muy Otsutsuki de tu parte MC. Es una lectura literalmente para pasar el rato ya que no te gustará mucho a menos que seas muy fan de Naruto. Este es un mc que hace las cosas enteramente por y para si mismo