16 Spoilers maybe?

Might contain spoilers so don't read if u don't want to.

I don't usually get a lot of comments or feedback so I am writing this to ask ur opinion. I wanna add a bit more fantasy/supernatural element to this story, maybe some other characters who have different superpowers, do you guys like this idea? Tell me what you think.

Also give me ideas on how to make the story more interesting, and drop some reviews.

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