Hey, this is the author! Below is a map of the continent Bjrothrone and the rest of the world Hyde was transported to, just in case you wonder. I'll post in as it updates in chapters 83 and on. Thanks for reading!
Review cause novel is 1st person, has good grammar, and tons of tiddi- I mean good plot. Also author is chill... But mostly because of the tidd- I mean plot.
I'm sure you will enjoy it all if your ok with harem genre and OP MC, which is a bit more better than a normal harem storyline here because they have anime girl and a good quality in writing character design that makes every chapter have there own good progress... overall it's a good thing to try (^._.^)ノ
Should’ve really let him die The MC is a BETA harem meister. That sums it up! ................................................................
a world that is out of control and filled with magic? Check! an MC that doesn't care how he gets the job done? Check! More wives then his sanity can handle? Check! Join the MC and this God companion on a journey to fix this broken world!
Mc is said to be a delinquent but what I found out about him is that , he is just another pushover and the interaction between characters is too subtle. Chapters are filled with slashes here and there. My head starts to hurt while reading this .
Overall Ive only read like 20 chapters and will definitely continue reading this story. Minor grammatical mistakes but none bad enough where you dont know what the author is saying. HUGE harem story Filled with humor and action. Also author i think it would be smart if you were to make an auxiliary chapter thats just a list of all the mc wifes with their name, race, and power, because i keep getting people mixed up lol.
I'm sorry to say this but i could read only till the chapter 3. Normally i would give it change, because i genuinely like harem genre and rarely drop a novel involves a harem route. But your novel feels like a causal conversation between 2 people due to your writing and narrative. Sometimes i can't understand what's happening due to things developing randomly and fast without having a proper explanation and building. Like he casually says he's from another word and she shouldn't say anything about it. But she just straight accepts it. No questions? No thoughts or precautions before revealing you're from another world? It seems everything is OK.
This is a great book and I just wish that it would allow me to read more chapters until I'm blocked by the locks😭😭😭😭😭. But I would just like to say keep up the good work
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The writing in the story could do better but if you comment on the story the auther will reply or like it,so if you ever see a mistake just comment it to help the auther out.The auther updates frequently with chapters.Since the auther works so hard leave a lil comment here and there to help keep the auther motivated! They write two stories so I know they must be overwhelmed at times 📝The story development is interesting and I can’t wait to see what else the auther has planned for the book.The charcter design feels a little rushed at some moments but thats just my opion🤷♀️(You may like how it is so check the book out.)Lastly the world background is thoght out really well I give it a 4.5 🙇♀️ P.S like I said the auther is really friendly and helps if something confuse you and if you are reading this have a nice day
The carachters are well developed. Updates are very frequent. Could use a little more background to the world but the read is from the MC's perspective. only complaint is sometimes the writing is strange or broken and a few misspelled words but that's forgivable, we are all human. Oh and its funny as ****, great job with the comedic factor of the story.[img=update]
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absolutely love this. I love the universe building, the characters all of it, I wished this was picking up traction so I could read more because dam is it good
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Rt to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be Don't Force Base 🙂😃🤠🙂😃☺️😅🙂😃😉😉☺️😅😜🐱☺️🤠🙂 try to the Moon to run at the same time It was the same time I don't have ah that's the same time I don't have ah phone again and
1.is this a big harem? 2.will she guard and protect her harem? 3.does it contain NTR? 1.is this a big harem? 2.will she guard and protect her harem? 3.does it contain NTR?