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Where do I even start? I love this! And I'm in love with your grammar and use of words. It's impeccable and allowed for an easy read. I loved the emotional turmoil of the characters, their miscommunication, and the mental trauma and grief they're going through. Jenny reminded me of myself a bit. Please keep updating, I would like to see how everything comes together!

I like how the story's going smoothly because of the way you write it. The flow is smooth, the events overlaps perfectly, the description of sensitive topics are well-written, and the characters' personalities are shown well despite not using flowery words. Keep it up! You're doing great!

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I love this. Interesting blurb and intriguing characters. The author really know his/her way with words. This is a master piece and I highly recommend this. Great job author

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What can I say... THIS NOVEL IS FANTASTIC. For the time I have read novels this is the first novel that's actually targeting human struggles... The story line at the moment is ✨chefs kiss✨ it's amazing. Currently read it through, wanted to see a few chaps but ended up reading half of it haha!. The Grammer is amazing tbh the writing style is perfect and easy to understand:) and easy to feel the characters emotions. Tbh I can't wait to get to the sweet parts of this novelll I will seriously read this whole thing after I get free and timee. I can't wait to see this author shine with their work!! Good luck!! Thx for ur tiem dear author-shii -Author-nim<3

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I started reading thinking it would be the usual romance story but hey, it was way better than what I had expected. the ML and FL didn’t felt cliche to me, i’m attracted to find out more about their pasts and secrets. I enjoyed the writing style and descriptions too (some of them are very cute, especially how the two of them met as kids). I’m anticipating there might be some heartbreaking moments or twists as the story progresses? Not sure what the writer has planned for us yet but I believe it will be something great :)

Character development, scenario setting, writing quality—just wow. Humble love story, as the title suggests. More plot twists are something I would love to read. Really fantastic. Got many things to learn from your writing.

I love this kind of sweet romance with simple and clear story development. It has the best writing quality and character design. I am wondering how is the sweet journey between these two orphans, Jenny and Gabriel in the end. Two thumbs up for the author!

It's got potential, for sure. The writing's got room for improvement, but the errors in grammar and composition that ARE present don't detract too much from the content itself. The plotline seems in line with various K-dramas I've caught wind of over the years, which does say something about the author's interests which may be influencing her writing. Keep working on your writing, and you'll go far.

I loved how the author portrayed the "humanity" in each character. She showed that no one is perfect and all our feelings of anxiety and the like are valid. I also loved the author's writing style and choice of words.

The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck

LOVE IT! Before I say anything I’m just going to give the author a round of applause! Personally the grammar is perf making everything easy to both read and understand. I love the details too. would DEFINITELY recommend to anyone. Hopefully this wins WSA awards! Author, you have my support (^_−)−☆

This is a great teen novel. The writing style is easy to understand. the story was fast-paced. Nonetheless, the character design and world BG were great. I'm waiting for the next update eagerly. Everything about it was perfect but there was this one thing that, I didn't feel any cliffhangers. The writer should take this in her concern. I rate this story a 4.8/5.0 I highly recommend this story. Give it a try. It's really good.

I like the flow of the story, so far I want a twist but it is relevant. I wish this novel nominate this WSA but so far I like how characters role

I don't really know what to say, the book left me speechless, I'm in love with this book like wow author, everything is well planned, they way you write makes me believe like it is not a fictional story but life story, I can even see the picture of the characters in the story great work author, this book deserves more than 5 stars

I like how your words are like-Just right. the character's acts and dialogue are also balanced... the tension/ hesitancy in the latest update is great

So far so good. Writing is good. Story is moving in a good direction. Past and present overlaps well. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]