4 Update- Authors note

Hey guys. I'm currently stuck. I've spent the last 4-5 days writing and rewriting the next chapter. But for life of my I can't figure out a way to make it make sense to me. Here's the premise, Lily is gonna live but I wanted to picture a bit of her pregnancy without it feeling so rushed. Even then, finding the point to change the POV back to Raphael, because ultimately it's just gonna be his point of view for pretty much the rest of the story. Where I'm currently stuck is figuring out how to describe/narrate Lily's pregnancy and Raphael POV, whether it's before birth or after. Nothing quite makes sense to me yet, but I'm working on it. So I am still writing, but having a bit of writers block. I will do my best to update a chapter I can be happy with, because I am trying not to rip my hair out doing it.

--Spoiler/Thought-- James isn't gonna be in the picture for long, but I was wondering if I could keep at least Alice, because I have always felt bad for Neville's backstory. Thoughts??

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