Stop Writing Like This

Random1: Hey how are you

Random2: I'm fine thank you. What about you?

No stop writing like this. Writing like that is called text writing. Because that's how people writing in text. Instead you should be writing like this.

Random1 sat down in the living room couch. He slipped off his shoes and put his feet on the table in front of him. He noticed random person 2 was also in the room going through files across from him. "Hey random person2 how was your day today?"

You know something like that. Also stop getting 'this' confused with "this" because "this" means you're speaking out loud. 'This means you're speaking in your head'